02-13-2018, 02:46 AM
@Reece/13:
>I'd recommend having gaze last a little bit longer. Otherwise anyone who blinks will miss the cool Lazer. Like, a second maybe? Half a second?
>You might want some description of the vortex in the last move. Is it just above Emp's head? Higher up? As big as him? Bigger? I'd recommend keeping it like a storm cloud just above his head, since that way you'd find it easier to use indoors (although can Emps even fit through doors?) but I guess it doesn't really matter. It's just an ambiguous part of the description that 13 should probably fill in.
>That's why I didn't flat out say no. I don't know how far you can stretch the variant system, so I cant say yes either. But, there's a difference between making the power of a ranged blast stronger (the Elemental Blast charged increases the potency of a minor debuff and the damage of the attack, the move doesn't make shields or do things that are clearly different) and making the duration/power of multiple different move types vary. That's something for a higher up to make a ruling on. I'm just warning you that you (or 13) might have to spend 3000 OM on this.
>I'd recommend having gaze last a little bit longer. Otherwise anyone who blinks will miss the cool Lazer. Like, a second maybe? Half a second?
>You might want some description of the vortex in the last move. Is it just above Emp's head? Higher up? As big as him? Bigger? I'd recommend keeping it like a storm cloud just above his head, since that way you'd find it easier to use indoors (although can Emps even fit through doors?) but I guess it doesn't really matter. It's just an ambiguous part of the description that 13 should probably fill in.
>That's why I didn't flat out say no. I don't know how far you can stretch the variant system, so I cant say yes either. But, there's a difference between making the power of a ranged blast stronger (the Elemental Blast charged increases the potency of a minor debuff and the damage of the attack, the move doesn't make shields or do things that are clearly different) and making the duration/power of multiple different move types vary. That's something for a higher up to make a ruling on. I'm just warning you that you (or 13) might have to spend 3000 OM on this.