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Approved Move Archive (2013 - May 2015)
Okor Wrote:Necrotic Touch (Requires physical, debuff proficiencies, 600 OM)
Okor's hands ooze a toxic slime, containing a particularly virulent strain of flesh-eating bacterium, which draws forth his various parasites with the promise of a meal. This ability takes two seconds of stationary concentration to activate, afterwards, Okor's hands become dangerous weapons. Contact with the substance seeping from his hands almost instantly causes deterioration. With only brief contact (such as a slap, or a punch), the area is irritated and sore. If Okor manages to maintain the contact for several seconds (such as by holding the enemy down), the skin begins to rot and soften. Should the unfortunate target be unable to free themselves from his grip for seven seconds, the damage becomes more severe, as a variety of infections and parasites begin to make their way to the foe, causing significant discomfort, and starting to worm their way into the foe's flesh. The foe's chances of escape are greatly increased if their ATK or DEF score is higher than Okor's. The parasites may be removed out of combat, with either the channeling of Omnillium, or skilled medical aid.
I basically just added the 'stationary' concentration bit, otherwise the 'concentration' is so vague that it's almost no downside. This version is fine, if you're okay with this then you can simply edit the description over your existing one. Sorry for the hassle! You may also change this and make another suggestion if you're not happy with it.
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Messages In This Thread
Approved Move Archive (2013 - May 2015) - by Omni - 08-22-2013, 09:10 AM
Re: Move Approval - by PepsiWhirda - 08-28-2013, 06:25 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Proto Man - 09-01-2013, 05:49 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 09-02-2013, 02:32 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Ganondorf - 09-05-2013, 07:53 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-06-2013, 06:21 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-06-2013, 07:11 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-06-2013, 09:20 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 09-06-2013, 10:32 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-07-2013, 06:50 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-08-2013, 07:06 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Magus - 09-09-2013, 11:58 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 09-22-2013, 02:24 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 10-03-2013, 06:51 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 10-03-2013, 11:28 PM
Re: Move Approval - by PepsiWhirda - 10-04-2013, 04:43 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Proto Man - 10-15-2013, 01:50 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Samus Aran - 01-29-2014, 07:47 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Proto Man - 01-29-2014, 10:57 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Harry Dresden - 02-09-2014, 10:53 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Shang Tsung - 02-12-2014, 01:24 AM

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