09-14-2013, 04:48 AM
*Groan*
"Before him, behind what looked like a shimmering pool of water, only somehow standing vertical, an enormous expanse of rolling meadows split by an ancient cobblestone road sprawled before him."
If someone would kindly delete that first 'before him' in my last post, I would be infinitely grateful.
I don't even care if you give me an OM hit. Bad writing is bad.
"Before him, behind what looked like a shimmering pool of water, only somehow standing vertical, an enormous expanse of rolling meadows split by an ancient cobblestone road sprawled before him."
If someone would kindly delete that first 'before him' in my last post, I would be infinitely grateful.
I don't even care if you give me an OM hit. Bad writing is bad.
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