05-09-2015, 12:58 AM
Whirda
Style: 5
Realism: 4
Grammar: 4
Cohesion: 4
Total: 17/20
Alain:
Style: 4
Realism: 4
Grammar: 3.5
Cohesion: 4
Total: 15.5/20
Protoman:
Style: 4
Realism: 4.5
Grammar: 4
Cohesion: 4
Total: 16.5/20
Atelos:
Style: 4.5
Realism: 4
Grammar: 3.5
Cohesion: 4
Total: 16/20
Victor: Whirda (your awesome maelstrom plot device and scene put you over the top just so you are aware).
I seriously want to express how much I enjoyed this thread. It was a great read and I am really sorry that anyone had to lose. I had to nitpick to arrive at these scores and ultimately it came down to what final post I thought was the best written and enjoyed the most. Thank you and I hope the ultimate resolution of the thread is just as fun to read.
Style: 5
Realism: 4
Grammar: 4
Cohesion: 4
Total: 17/20
Alain:
Style: 4
Realism: 4
Grammar: 3.5
Cohesion: 4
Total: 15.5/20
Protoman:
Style: 4
Realism: 4.5
Grammar: 4
Cohesion: 4
Total: 16.5/20
Atelos:
Style: 4.5
Realism: 4
Grammar: 3.5
Cohesion: 4
Total: 16/20
Victor: Whirda (your awesome maelstrom plot device and scene put you over the top just so you are aware).
I seriously want to express how much I enjoyed this thread. It was a great read and I am really sorry that anyone had to lose. I had to nitpick to arrive at these scores and ultimately it came down to what final post I thought was the best written and enjoyed the most. Thank you and I hope the ultimate resolution of the thread is just as fun to read.
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