Let's Read: Book Club #14

[Guu]

Sorry, could only manage one this time (better than the none we got last time.)


"On The Run"
“I didn’t ask for it be this way. I didn’t ask to be made!” -sorry

This is more a first reaction than an review. I hope it helps anyways. xD

I liked the sense of wariness from Harry’s first post. It’s a good bit of inflection though brief. I would have thought the local authorities would have given you hassle for just up and taking a boat like that, but I’ll let it slide. Stormtroopers after all.

Mami’s writing has very nice and picturesque descriptions to them which is a nice touch.

I’m guessing Mami was sensing Harry’s magic? If so, that’s an interesting interpretation of her soul gem abilities.

Mami is ever so friendly to her bounty. Hehehe.

Inner Gandalf. lol.

I love when players play up the misunderstandings that could arise from the setting. Mami thinking he’s a witch and Harry thinking she’s a fae thing (whatever he has in his universe) is a good excuse for them to fight.

The fight itself was fairly fun. I liked that Mami didn’t give herself the edge, she realistically was taken aback by the fire and ice attacks. She really did underestimate her opponent. At the same time, it wasn’t curve stomp as harry did get some hits from the shots. I do like that you guys played up the toll the combat took on your spirits.

Interesting Harry spared Mami’s life considering. I guess he’s normal self came back in eventually.

I really like the aftermath. You guys set the somewhat solemn tone well as you two parted, as well as the suggestion that Mami may face him one day.

Anyway, in conclusion, good read!