02-16-2018, 02:58 AM
This story started in a place that could easily be referred to plainly as the desert. It starts with a character played by Strazio named Isaac. Isaac seems to be on a quest to stop an anger prone Prime from getting himself in trouble.
The character seems to be looking for Omni, most strange. Next we shift to Gildarts characters Christa who is hanging out with some cowboys who I guess are suited for this kind of endless desert.
I have no idea why the Empire hates these people Orman they hate the Empire but it is an interesting fight nonetheless. Seem s Isaac desires as little violence as possible while Christa seeks out as much trouble as possible to get her thrills.
Next we get some back story in a bar scene, not as good as the cantina scene from Star Wars but it serves its purpose.
Both these characters seem to have high hopes, one wanting to go to the oververse while the other wants to fight the Empire, no chance of their goals being boring it seems. I do wonder how they got themselves into this though.
Using omnillium as the currency is odd to me but make sure sense considering it’s basically the middle of nowhere, the two seem to make quite a pair.
Together strazio and gildarts make quite a writing pair with both adding much to the story.
I do wonder if the two were experienced with western movies? Either way it was easier to follow then some of them I’ve seen.
Cars on the other hand not something in western movies but cool to read, I personally dont know much about the endless dunes but I wasn’t expecting vehicles. The ending seems to point to a continued adventure, I think the pair of characters have a good chance of achieving something but not without a lot of fighting and further sacrifice.
The character seems to be looking for Omni, most strange. Next we shift to Gildarts characters Christa who is hanging out with some cowboys who I guess are suited for this kind of endless desert.
I have no idea why the Empire hates these people Orman they hate the Empire but it is an interesting fight nonetheless. Seem s Isaac desires as little violence as possible while Christa seeks out as much trouble as possible to get her thrills.
Next we get some back story in a bar scene, not as good as the cantina scene from Star Wars but it serves its purpose.
Both these characters seem to have high hopes, one wanting to go to the oververse while the other wants to fight the Empire, no chance of their goals being boring it seems. I do wonder how they got themselves into this though.
Using omnillium as the currency is odd to me but make sure sense considering it’s basically the middle of nowhere, the two seem to make quite a pair.
Together strazio and gildarts make quite a writing pair with both adding much to the story.
I do wonder if the two were experienced with western movies? Either way it was easier to follow then some of them I’ve seen.
Cars on the other hand not something in western movies but cool to read, I personally dont know much about the endless dunes but I wasn’t expecting vehicles. The ending seems to point to a continued adventure, I think the pair of characters have a good chance of achieving something but not without a lot of fighting and further sacrifice.