04-29-2015, 12:52 AM
Best character- Mami
Mami has a couple of threads this month, one of them she collaborates with Sasuke and it flows very well. When I read her work I get a strong sense that she knows her character well, the character is relatable to other characters, and that the audience's intrigue and same incline to action never ceases when she is around. Her presence is complementary to any thread she's in and never has a boring reaction.
Mami gets best character in my book because she is always on the go, stays true to herself and is compatible with many other partners in the Omniverse. Her fight with Harry was great, invigorating, and a fun read for everyone.
Best Writer- Harry Dresden
The duel with Mami was superbly written. I enjoyed your style of concise details that fell into place with the context of his character. In battle, Harry's descriptions were vivid and really painted a picture in my mind. Harry didn't just "tell" his moves but he showed them and he did this masterfully.
You both did a great job in the thread and each of you wrote wonderfully.
Best Solo Story- Protoman's Makings of Legend
After reading a good portion of it, I found myself really enjoying the style and how entertaining his adventures became. It's a fun story, good as well as ever changing plot, and I like the many dynamics of the evolving Wartortle (well, you know) and his sunglasses are way cool. I found it to be an imaginative adventure and it's also very inspirational. It quickly became one of my favorite things written on the site and I can't wait to finish it.
Most helpful- Sasuke
He is very social and seems like a helpful guy, if I had a question or wanted some advice I wouldn't hesitate to approach him even though I haven't gotten to know him that well.
Rising star- Shay Cormac
After looking at his joining thread I thought the character looked very promising, I especially like the moves he has created so far. I can see him doing well here and like the character. Keep it up!
NPC- Behemoth
After some thought on the general topic of character interaction, I realized I had a great time scheming using Behemoth as a supporting character in the jailbreak. He conquered the thread after he was introduced and I have to say, Gildarts would probably have caused some needless carnage without Behemoth's crucially executed tact. I gave him a cool power that mainly planned for their escape, but it actually (subtly) made him more useful and more much powerful than even Gildarts in many ways because of where a battle against Behemoth would actually be waged: His mind.
Mami has a couple of threads this month, one of them she collaborates with Sasuke and it flows very well. When I read her work I get a strong sense that she knows her character well, the character is relatable to other characters, and that the audience's intrigue and same incline to action never ceases when she is around. Her presence is complementary to any thread she's in and never has a boring reaction.
Mami gets best character in my book because she is always on the go, stays true to herself and is compatible with many other partners in the Omniverse. Her fight with Harry was great, invigorating, and a fun read for everyone.
Best Writer- Harry Dresden
The duel with Mami was superbly written. I enjoyed your style of concise details that fell into place with the context of his character. In battle, Harry's descriptions were vivid and really painted a picture in my mind. Harry didn't just "tell" his moves but he showed them and he did this masterfully.
You both did a great job in the thread and each of you wrote wonderfully.
Best Solo Story- Protoman's Makings of Legend
After reading a good portion of it, I found myself really enjoying the style and how entertaining his adventures became. It's a fun story, good as well as ever changing plot, and I like the many dynamics of the evolving Wartortle (well, you know) and his sunglasses are way cool. I found it to be an imaginative adventure and it's also very inspirational. It quickly became one of my favorite things written on the site and I can't wait to finish it.
Most helpful- Sasuke
He is very social and seems like a helpful guy, if I had a question or wanted some advice I wouldn't hesitate to approach him even though I haven't gotten to know him that well.
Rising star- Shay Cormac
After looking at his joining thread I thought the character looked very promising, I especially like the moves he has created so far. I can see him doing well here and like the character. Keep it up!
NPC- Behemoth
After some thought on the general topic of character interaction, I realized I had a great time scheming using Behemoth as a supporting character in the jailbreak. He conquered the thread after he was introduced and I have to say, Gildarts would probably have caused some needless carnage without Behemoth's crucially executed tact. I gave him a cool power that mainly planned for their escape, but it actually (subtly) made him more useful and more much powerful than even Gildarts in many ways because of where a battle against Behemoth would actually be waged: His mind.
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