04-24-2015, 08:36 PM
Book Club 13!
The Search for Power
Wow, what a cool thread. I haven’t read any of your past work Strazio but this one starts out great.
I don’t know much about strazio’s character but at the same time that didn’t stop me from getting really into the story. Vocabulary is great and meshed well with your opening post that was so intriguing I didn’t have to feel persuaded to continue the read.
You captured the PM well and I could definitely feel the mystery woven into the story with every post, it leaves the reader wanting more from the strazio and the forming plot inclines the audience as well to want to read further into the story and discover who strazio is and what he is searching for.
As the story continued I liked where I felt it was going. Progression went along well for Strazio as he grew out of the ‘new prime’ state and I feel he established himself for a future in Darkshire as well as the PM. The summoning of the notebook was somewhat sentimental and offered a new perspective onto the character.
The action against Nemesis was really cool and I enjoyed how you ended the story with the same words that the audience began with, its title: The Search for Power.
The Last Avenger and The world of Omni: Raincheck
Wow! What a cool Nexus introduction post! Sasuke is as cool as ever when you portray him. Arnold and Margaret are some early insight on what Coruscant might have in store, and I rather like how their conversation leads into Sasuke’s arrival.
Not going to lie, I thought the part where she said “They killed kenny!” was actually hilarious rather than tragic and its rare for jokes like that the amuse me.
Mami and Sasuke get along very well, its really nice to see some primes that are so fun, active, and ready for action. As they take on the snake it was a cool twist to see Orochimaru appear as though Sasuke himself had unconsciously summoned him there. Sasuke your sentence structure and writing was very coherent, never once did I find myself as a reader floundering to figure out what was happening in the midst of the trouble.
You certainly paint a picture with words and the bold action and sound effects kind of break up and invigorate the action in a way I wouldn’t have expected. Whaaat Obito meets Sasuke!
Also I thought it was nicely put together that Sasuke never actually “voiced” who he was trying to find. It added to the mystique of the post and storyline as well as Sasuke’s character.
Mami, Sasuke, Lubbock and everyone else you did a great job with this thread. It was entertaining, fun, and lighthearted and I think it came out pretty great.
The Search for Power
Wow, what a cool thread. I haven’t read any of your past work Strazio but this one starts out great.
I don’t know much about strazio’s character but at the same time that didn’t stop me from getting really into the story. Vocabulary is great and meshed well with your opening post that was so intriguing I didn’t have to feel persuaded to continue the read.
You captured the PM well and I could definitely feel the mystery woven into the story with every post, it leaves the reader wanting more from the strazio and the forming plot inclines the audience as well to want to read further into the story and discover who strazio is and what he is searching for.
As the story continued I liked where I felt it was going. Progression went along well for Strazio as he grew out of the ‘new prime’ state and I feel he established himself for a future in Darkshire as well as the PM. The summoning of the notebook was somewhat sentimental and offered a new perspective onto the character.
The action against Nemesis was really cool and I enjoyed how you ended the story with the same words that the audience began with, its title: The Search for Power.
The Last Avenger and The world of Omni: Raincheck
Wow! What a cool Nexus introduction post! Sasuke is as cool as ever when you portray him. Arnold and Margaret are some early insight on what Coruscant might have in store, and I rather like how their conversation leads into Sasuke’s arrival.
Not going to lie, I thought the part where she said “They killed kenny!” was actually hilarious rather than tragic and its rare for jokes like that the amuse me.
Mami and Sasuke get along very well, its really nice to see some primes that are so fun, active, and ready for action. As they take on the snake it was a cool twist to see Orochimaru appear as though Sasuke himself had unconsciously summoned him there. Sasuke your sentence structure and writing was very coherent, never once did I find myself as a reader floundering to figure out what was happening in the midst of the trouble.
You certainly paint a picture with words and the bold action and sound effects kind of break up and invigorate the action in a way I wouldn’t have expected. Whaaat Obito meets Sasuke!
Also I thought it was nicely put together that Sasuke never actually “voiced” who he was trying to find. It added to the mystique of the post and storyline as well as Sasuke’s character.
Mami, Sasuke, Lubbock and everyone else you did a great job with this thread. It was entertaining, fun, and lighthearted and I think it came out pretty great.
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