04-24-2015, 03:20 AM
Snatched From Marvel
This is one particular genre of writing that is the hardest, and that is Comedy. It's not enough to just writing an interesting story but know how to tickle your reader's funny bones. And you managed to do that very well. When I read through this the second time for this review, I was still getting chuckles from them. This is particularly important for someone RPing as Deadpool since it is VERY easy to write a terrible Deadpool. It really helps that you rein in 4th wall breaking, since that's something that goes old REALLY fast, and the references you make are a bit more obscure than just throwing overused memes at us. With a good introduction to the character and a bit of action, it's a very good first ste for the merc with a mouth,
The thing that caught be off guard was the change to Deadpool's text (from bolt to red), but I don't think that's going to be a problem in further posts
This is one particular genre of writing that is the hardest, and that is Comedy. It's not enough to just writing an interesting story but know how to tickle your reader's funny bones. And you managed to do that very well. When I read through this the second time for this review, I was still getting chuckles from them. This is particularly important for someone RPing as Deadpool since it is VERY easy to write a terrible Deadpool. It really helps that you rein in 4th wall breaking, since that's something that goes old REALLY fast, and the references you make are a bit more obscure than just throwing overused memes at us. With a good introduction to the character and a bit of action, it's a very good first ste for the merc with a mouth,
The thing that caught be off guard was the change to Deadpool's text (from bolt to red), but I don't think that's going to be a problem in further posts
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