04-16-2015, 12:14 PM
While I don't think you had the best example (since bludgeon the verb has a few meanings), it's a good point that people too often try to fancy up their stuff to the point where it's painful and terrible and they throw in these 5$ words that just jar me as a reader.
Just be natural, whether that's to your character or to you the writer.
Just be natural, whether that's to your character or to you the writer.
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