Let's Read: Book Club # 3, 12

[Guu]

Camelot's Alchemist:

Interesting you immediately thrust Ed into action. Though based on his dialogue, he seemed to really need to let off some steam. Damn you Truth! #blessomni

Short joke of course, though considering this Ed is like 5'6". that seems a bit odd... I guess that part was before we hammered that detail out.

Orc with an axe! Admittedly, considering his skin color, I thought he was going to be Orker, or the actor that become Orker. That's be a twisted origin story... the one we got is only a cover to hide his Brigand past... then again, Orcs get a bad rep as it is, forget about it.

I do like that Ed is trolling the Orc, trying to get him angry so he'd slip up. Shows how strategic Ed is.

Nice little pathos with the birds. I also like the little slow moment with Ed enjoying the natures. Not to mention all those time reminiscing of Winry. Awwww D:

Oh wait, that was set up for her summoning. That was funny. Suuuddenly Winryyy, was standing behind me!

Anyways, I really like the interactions between Edward and Winry. They have good chemistry. You'd think she'd ask a few more follow up questions but eh, I guess she did that off screen.

Winry is incredibly accepting of this whole thing. I couldn't tell you if it's out of character to be this accepting of suddenly being in a whole new world. She's already got business plans. xD

I wonder if all the cleanliness descriptions are building up to some big reveal... hmmm...

Or maybe it's foreshadowing to the fact that he'll soon be somewhere that isn't clean! Dun Dun Dun!

THE CROCODILE! Jazz hands!

Nice little twist with the guard croc. Now I'm really imagining her as Amethyst...

Off to Dalaran! Thanks oddly convenient mousy boy! I'm sure you won't come up later!

I really really really like how you describe Dalaran. You make me regret not making a character who'd be at home in Camelot. xD

Ooh, and again with your descriptions of the Library. Ugh, I need to get more interesting stuff in the Tangled!

I find it odd he doesn't find book on potion making in the alchemy section. Kind of wanted to see him react to stuff like that in the library! xD

Chance meeting with research guy!

You do a good job presenting the science of your world as an academic study worth pursuing! I could really see Edward as a teacher in his school of his.

Oh... I thought you already had your school up and running when you met Dumbledore... um... my bad. @.@

Well, you did a good job justifying why Dumbledore would see him. I mean, it would make sense he would take seriously the words of a boy to come speak with him in person, and it would make sense he doesn't have anything else scheduled that.

Protoman as Dumbledore is awesome of course. I wonder how this section would have been like if it had been me writing it. Probably not as great.
Seriously, I'm underplaying how well Proto portrays this character. Am I reading a Harry Potter book now?

Also, this is OOC, but i love the three choices at the end of Proto's first post. Reminds me of a "choose your own adventure" book.

I loved Edward's reaction to Dumbledore. It's a pretty accurate depiction of how you should feel after a conversation with that character.

And yeah, saving the mole seemed like that best choice.


Anyways, great read! Sorry this came out all disjointed. Shouldn't really do a post when sleep deprived xD

Welp! time for a nap!