03-14-2015, 02:35 AM
Book club X
Cinnabar Island
YAHOOOOOOO!
I have never seen One Piece before, I always found a reason to put it off (usually the same one) because it has a myriad of episodes. Though some of the best things can't be measured in something as horribly definitive as numbers. Anyway, as I read Buggy and Luffy's adventure (and later some more crewmen and Lopunny), I found myself feeling more and more entertained in an upbeat tempo of action and exclamation.
I enjoyed the consistency of character that carried through the adventurous dynamic. I'd have to say that I really like Buggy, because he's not someone who can be figured out at a first glance. He keeps things interesting and the character design (or face attached to the character) is just plain cool.
Needless to say, I found the story enchanting as I was swept off to a sea of adventure and cast away on waters of excitement.
The dictation and noises really amuse me and the spacing for that was perfect as well.
I definitely found myself laughing and smiling at parts that were funny, especially when Luffy sweeps up crew members left and right.
I enjoy how things fall into place rather well and the overall action and back round that surround each integrated character.
I'm amused that Luffy finds his way toward fighting against POKEMON in the colosseum and just the way it happened as well. Later some more characters find themselves in the midst of Cinnabar Island! (Yay!) and more action commences as well as drama!
Overall, I really enjoyed the theme and all together the story. It was held together by strong action and an equally strong character (in more ways than physical characteristics) and I feel as though you portray Luffy superbly well.
As it concludes (okay but not really), I can't wait to see how the ensuing battle(s?) begin!
From Aquiline to the Abyss
I enjoyed the sentence structure, conduction and how it was composed because there is so much in a sentence and it wasn’t forced. Vocabulary was divine and fit the structure well. With simplicity there is depth, I can easily say you didn’t over-do it and kept it at a balanced level that was enjoyable for me (the reader). I appreciated the insight given by the the overall backed layer of knowledge.
The calibrations were fitting, how they unfolded and how they were distinct almost made it seem metallic. I look forward to seeing more of this Prime.
Pokemon Philosophy
Lopunny’s adventures are always innovative and integrate plenty of character progression, keeping the level of intrigue high. On one hand, to keep the reader fixed with concentration, she maintains a dynamic wave of growth (and later, faces and reestablishes growth, which I appreciate as well because it corresponds with progression). On another, the action augments not just to the storyline or current plot but it reasonably details to the character of Lopunny itself.
As Lopunny becomes her own pokemon, there’s almost a tangible context of self appreciation. But the tests and trials don’t stop there.
As the story progresses, I start to understand Lopunny’s character a little better and at one point I realized how CUTE she is. You heard me right. I personally felt as though she was very pure of heart and am certain just in this little time of training she has grown as a character. (Also he hugged that goron and it was really just adorably sentimental.)
The action cascaded with purpose and Lopunny pursues her rival and perhaps, finds her calling.. I like how that was prioritized because it keeps the pace going and gives Lopunny and the reader something to fight for along side her.
Cinnabar Island
YAHOOOOOOO!
I have never seen One Piece before, I always found a reason to put it off (usually the same one) because it has a myriad of episodes. Though some of the best things can't be measured in something as horribly definitive as numbers. Anyway, as I read Buggy and Luffy's adventure (and later some more crewmen and Lopunny), I found myself feeling more and more entertained in an upbeat tempo of action and exclamation.
I enjoyed the consistency of character that carried through the adventurous dynamic. I'd have to say that I really like Buggy, because he's not someone who can be figured out at a first glance. He keeps things interesting and the character design (or face attached to the character) is just plain cool.
Needless to say, I found the story enchanting as I was swept off to a sea of adventure and cast away on waters of excitement.
The dictation and noises really amuse me and the spacing for that was perfect as well.
I definitely found myself laughing and smiling at parts that were funny, especially when Luffy sweeps up crew members left and right.
I enjoy how things fall into place rather well and the overall action and back round that surround each integrated character.
I'm amused that Luffy finds his way toward fighting against POKEMON in the colosseum and just the way it happened as well. Later some more characters find themselves in the midst of Cinnabar Island! (Yay!) and more action commences as well as drama!
Overall, I really enjoyed the theme and all together the story. It was held together by strong action and an equally strong character (in more ways than physical characteristics) and I feel as though you portray Luffy superbly well.
As it concludes (okay but not really), I can't wait to see how the ensuing battle(s?) begin!
From Aquiline to the Abyss
I enjoyed the sentence structure, conduction and how it was composed because there is so much in a sentence and it wasn’t forced. Vocabulary was divine and fit the structure well. With simplicity there is depth, I can easily say you didn’t over-do it and kept it at a balanced level that was enjoyable for me (the reader). I appreciated the insight given by the the overall backed layer of knowledge.
The calibrations were fitting, how they unfolded and how they were distinct almost made it seem metallic. I look forward to seeing more of this Prime.
Pokemon Philosophy
Lopunny’s adventures are always innovative and integrate plenty of character progression, keeping the level of intrigue high. On one hand, to keep the reader fixed with concentration, she maintains a dynamic wave of growth (and later, faces and reestablishes growth, which I appreciate as well because it corresponds with progression). On another, the action augments not just to the storyline or current plot but it reasonably details to the character of Lopunny itself.
As Lopunny becomes her own pokemon, there’s almost a tangible context of self appreciation. But the tests and trials don’t stop there.
As the story progresses, I start to understand Lopunny’s character a little better and at one point I realized how CUTE she is. You heard me right. I personally felt as though she was very pure of heart and am certain just in this little time of training she has grown as a character. (Also he hugged that goron and it was really just adorably sentimental.)
The action cascaded with purpose and Lopunny pursues her rival and perhaps, finds her calling.. I like how that was prioritized because it keeps the pace going and gives Lopunny and the reader something to fight for along side her.
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