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Approved Move Archive (2013 - May 2015)
Jace Beleren Wrote:Telepathic Suggestion (Requires Telepathy, Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency): 300 OM
Jace telepathically suggests a course of action to the target, fooling them into thinking it was their idea all along. The more uncharacteristic the action is of the target, the more easily they can shake off the effects of this move (e.g., suggesting the target walk around the corner would succeed with little difficulty, whereas suggesting they kill their best friend would be nearly impossible unless they had critically low TEC). Sending a telepathic suggestion requires several seconds of intense concentration, rendering it untenable in frenzied combat. This move is more effective when used in conjunction with Psychic Spiral. Successive uses of Telepathic Suggestion within an hour-long period will be less likely to succeed as the target builds a tolerance for the spell.

Approved.

Quote:Psychic Spiral (Requires Telepathy, Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency): 300 OM
Bombards the target's mind with chaotic images and disorienting thoughts, making it difficult to make sense of the world around them. Targets affected by Psychic Spiral are more susceptible to all forms of psionic intrusion. It takes a few seconds of concentration to send a basic Psychic Spiral lasting five to ten seconds. The longer Jace concentrates when casting this spell, the longer the effect persists, up to a maximum of ten seconds of concentration and thirty seconds of effect. Successive uses of Psychic Spiral within an hour-long period will be less likely to succeed as the target builds a tolerance for the spell.

Does charging it up make the effect worse? If so, add +300.

Otherwise, this seems fine to me, and it's approved. As I know you probably want this more so for writing rather than PvP, you can feel free to have these moves have more of an effect on secondaries. That cool?
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Approved Move Archive (2013 - May 2015) - by Omni - 08-22-2013, 09:10 AM
Re: Move Approval - by PepsiWhirda - 08-28-2013, 06:25 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Proto Man - 09-01-2013, 05:49 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 09-02-2013, 02:32 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Ganondorf - 09-05-2013, 07:53 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-06-2013, 06:21 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-06-2013, 07:11 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-06-2013, 09:20 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 09-06-2013, 10:32 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-07-2013, 06:50 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-08-2013, 07:06 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Magus - 09-09-2013, 11:58 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 09-22-2013, 02:24 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 10-03-2013, 06:51 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 10-03-2013, 11:28 PM
Re: Move Approval - by PepsiWhirda - 10-04-2013, 04:43 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Proto Man - 10-15-2013, 01:50 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Samus Aran - 01-29-2014, 07:47 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Proto Man - 01-29-2014, 10:57 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Harry Dresden - 02-09-2014, 10:53 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Shang Tsung - 02-12-2014, 01:24 AM

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