03-05-2015, 11:19 PM
Hey there just a few things that need touching up before you can be approved. First off with the History we don't really require you to type it all out. Instead, just tell us exactly when in Movie canon your Thor is taken so others have a reference point to go off of when they roleplay with you. If you had to write it all out that would be a bit overkill - unless you enjoy doing that, it is unnecessary for canon characters.
Secondly, Hammer Swing would probably work out better if you make the Move Mjolnir (the actual weapon not an action) as you can swing it as a hammer if you have it as a Weapon based Move. So, describe the armament what it looks like those sort of things, give some relation to its size. Basically, write it for someone whom has never seen it before and has no idea who Thor is. You can keep the fluff 'giving the toughest opponents a moments pause,' but remember the actual damage you can dish out is directly linked to your Attack stat.
Lastly, for Hammer Throw if you want it to be able to return directly to you, I'm sorry but you're going to need the Homing Prof - or the remote control prof if you want to directly control it. Otherwise I would have to say Thor would physically need to retrieve it as it is a piece of equipment. Remember though even if you don't have the ability to have it return to you now, you can always upgrade the Move by resubmitting it in the Move Approval thread when you do have the required proficiencies~
Secondly, Hammer Swing would probably work out better if you make the Move Mjolnir (the actual weapon not an action) as you can swing it as a hammer if you have it as a Weapon based Move. So, describe the armament what it looks like those sort of things, give some relation to its size. Basically, write it for someone whom has never seen it before and has no idea who Thor is. You can keep the fluff 'giving the toughest opponents a moments pause,' but remember the actual damage you can dish out is directly linked to your Attack stat.
Lastly, for Hammer Throw if you want it to be able to return directly to you, I'm sorry but you're going to need the Homing Prof - or the remote control prof if you want to directly control it. Otherwise I would have to say Thor would physically need to retrieve it as it is a piece of equipment. Remember though even if you don't have the ability to have it return to you now, you can always upgrade the Move by resubmitting it in the Move Approval thread when you do have the required proficiencies~
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