Orihime Inoue

[Guu]

I apologize for jumping the gun there. ^^;
While the rest of staff is working out your identities, let's give this a look over.

First of all, you history needs to mention getting taken by Omni, just so we know what point in your history you were snatched.

(Requires Physical Strength Prof and Debuff Prof-OM: ???)
Commander Lexa’s rapier, a weapon of old. The very hilt, of the blade is a formable foe as it is forged form the deadliest materials from the ground, undergoing nuclear warfare, its bite leaves a poisonous effect on anyone other than Lexa herself. With each blow her opponent is further and further intoxicated causing the onset of blindness, paralysis, pain, and finally death if the strikes continue long enough. The effect also wears off without constant exposure.[/b]

Hmmm, a move that gets more powerful the more times you use it? Yikes...
Well, first off, you need to make it clear if you can do stabbing damage with this move while your poisoning. Also, this needs more setbacks for balancing reasons. Gonna need to know how long the poison lasts (mind you, most battles between other PCs last 3 rounds.) Also, we'll need more detail on how many stabs you'd need. I think the penalties are a little much...
For frame of ref read this (it continues to the bottom of the page.) These are hurdles my alt character had to leap through just to have a move that slows an opponent and for half a round and a move that lowers defense for a full round. Just look that over to get an idea of what we are looking for with low level debuff moves.