03-01-2015, 06:47 PM
Monster Meets King
Originally, I thought this was going to be the innocent young Eudocia being corrupted by Gilgamesh. Turns out, that's only partially true. The entire thing was very well written, with sensory imagery being used liberally. The amount of detail that was put into each post was incredible, and it really fleshed out the characters. If I had any complaints, it would be that the dialogue wasn't too well written. Some of it seemed a little shoe horned in for character development, and unnatural, but that's just my opinion. All in all, a lovely piece of work. I look forward to reading more!
Cinnabon Isle Arc
A lovely tale of swashbuckling. The entire story seemed bursting with energy, as the characters blazed their way across the sea. Combat was fast-paced, well-written, and displayed the strengths of the characters very well. The characters were every bit the rogue, and their rapscallion ways were amply demonstrated. Buggy seemed a bit insane, but I suppose that's his character. Overall, it was a very exciting and quick-moving story. It was quite enjoyable.
Between the Velvet Lines
I admit, I had to rush through those lovely walls of text in order to make this deadline. Nonetheless, the amount of effort and creativity that went into it is astounding. It was worth a chortle to watch the magnificent Dio attempting to hold things together as the superhuman nature and differing personalities of his guests started to wear at him. I do hope I encounter the chance to participate in something of this caliber in the future, as the sheer volume of story that was present in that piece was magnificent.
Originally, I thought this was going to be the innocent young Eudocia being corrupted by Gilgamesh. Turns out, that's only partially true. The entire thing was very well written, with sensory imagery being used liberally. The amount of detail that was put into each post was incredible, and it really fleshed out the characters. If I had any complaints, it would be that the dialogue wasn't too well written. Some of it seemed a little shoe horned in for character development, and unnatural, but that's just my opinion. All in all, a lovely piece of work. I look forward to reading more!
Cinnabon Isle Arc
A lovely tale of swashbuckling. The entire story seemed bursting with energy, as the characters blazed their way across the sea. Combat was fast-paced, well-written, and displayed the strengths of the characters very well. The characters were every bit the rogue, and their rapscallion ways were amply demonstrated. Buggy seemed a bit insane, but I suppose that's his character. Overall, it was a very exciting and quick-moving story. It was quite enjoyable.
Between the Velvet Lines
I admit, I had to rush through those lovely walls of text in order to make this deadline. Nonetheless, the amount of effort and creativity that went into it is astounding. It was worth a chortle to watch the magnificent Dio attempting to hold things together as the superhuman nature and differing personalities of his guests started to wear at him. I do hope I encounter the chance to participate in something of this caliber in the future, as the sheer volume of story that was present in that piece was magnificent.
Torcher of tomes, slayer of sorcerers, taker of ears, and flayer of men. Reasonable rates.