03-01-2015, 06:06 PM
I’d like The Pokemon Philosophy to be featured next time if that’s ok. <3
Monster Meets King
Finally I get to read this! <3
First of all, Gilgamesh x Eudocia. If I didn’t already blow my OTP card on Kito’s topic, I’d used it here.
Seriously, I really like the dom/sub relationship between the two. You guys play off each other well. It’s really cute in a monstrous S&M sort of way. ^^
Also, I like the perspective based narrative. How you two write for each other, but fill in the blanks at the same time to give character development for both of you.
Battles were great; I particularly like the part when Docy stabbed Kevin. Really milked the tragedy of the situation there.
The character moments were great. I like the mere conflict you have just scratching an itch. xD
Anyways, fun, gripping, and slightly terrifying. This was worth the read! ^^
Cinnabon Isle Arc
Fantastic!
I think I said this last time, but I’m genuinely impressed how well you captured the spirit of One Piece in your writing. The interactions between Luffy and the crew remind me of something I’d see in the show!
It was an incredibly good idea to set this on Cinnabar; the world of Pokemon is just silly enough to merge well with One Piece. Also I like how you’re setting up the royalty of Cinnabar, as well as a cute moment with the prince and princesses. <3
It is a little weird having Kilala there, but she’s a cute addition none-the-less.
Oh yeah! Flabebe was adorable! ^^ I love how Luffy just kind of immediately accepts things. Also, did she seriously refer to Luffy as an “Ignorant Lout?” xD
I also enjoyed Michael’s posts. His slow bounding with the young Charmander is really cute. ^^ I don’t know yet how you intend to get involved with the coliseum thing but I look forward to seeing how that plays!
Anyways, quite enjoyed this!
Monster Meets King
Finally I get to read this! <3
First of all, Gilgamesh x Eudocia. If I didn’t already blow my OTP card on Kito’s topic, I’d used it here.
Seriously, I really like the dom/sub relationship between the two. You guys play off each other well. It’s really cute in a monstrous S&M sort of way. ^^
Also, I like the perspective based narrative. How you two write for each other, but fill in the blanks at the same time to give character development for both of you.
Battles were great; I particularly like the part when Docy stabbed Kevin. Really milked the tragedy of the situation there.
The character moments were great. I like the mere conflict you have just scratching an itch. xD
Anyways, fun, gripping, and slightly terrifying. This was worth the read! ^^
Cinnabon Isle Arc
Fantastic!
I think I said this last time, but I’m genuinely impressed how well you captured the spirit of One Piece in your writing. The interactions between Luffy and the crew remind me of something I’d see in the show!
It was an incredibly good idea to set this on Cinnabar; the world of Pokemon is just silly enough to merge well with One Piece. Also I like how you’re setting up the royalty of Cinnabar, as well as a cute moment with the prince and princesses. <3
It is a little weird having Kilala there, but she’s a cute addition none-the-less.
Oh yeah! Flabebe was adorable! ^^ I love how Luffy just kind of immediately accepts things. Also, did she seriously refer to Luffy as an “Ignorant Lout?” xD
I also enjoyed Michael’s posts. His slow bounding with the young Charmander is really cute. ^^ I don’t know yet how you intend to get involved with the coliseum thing but I look forward to seeing how that plays!
Anyways, quite enjoyed this!
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