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Move Creation Workshop
(07-17-2018, 10:35 PM)Jack Spicer Wrote: DOM - Iron Body (Physical Strength, Area Defense, 300): 
[spoiler]A Technique Jack perfected based off of the "Metal Weapons" that he seemed to be able to do. It's not so much a technique per say as him pushing a button on his watch. When he does activate this, it takes 7 seconds. A gun metal gray exoskeleton made out of Iron will form over his body, for his own use. When this forms, it can last at maximum up to 10 seconds. It is capable of blocking most damage that is headed his way. When he is making this, Jack cannot move a muscle, much less attack or defend himself in the slightest. After this is made, however, Jack is free to attack. For the exoskeleton can be used as a weapon by Jack to deliver iron-reinforced kicks, punches, and headbutts.[/spoiler]
DOM -  Plasma Blaster (Ranged Proficiency, Homing, 300 OM): 
[spoiler]One of the weapons systems installed into the DOM Iron Body by Jack Spicer. This takes him about 5 seconds to charge up for the normal blasts of the attack that pack as much power as a punch. This travels at 1/10th the speed of an arrow. While the blast is slow moving, and could be choreographed from a mile away, it is a powerful laser. Homes in an opponent for 75 feet, but is slow. [/spoiler]
DOM - Arm Blade (Physical Strength, Area Attack, 600): 
[spoiler]Should he be unable to hold a weapon, Jack can choose to replace one of his arms with a blade made out of metal that will appear over the hand of him. One of the limits of DOM Arm Blade is that it takes him 9 seconds to materialize. It can also only be materialized when he has Iron Body active, because the Arm Blade replaces one of the hands of Iron Body. The sword can be used for wide slashes, or for close range combat.[/spoiler]

Iron Body: Looks good, but should cost 600 OM (300 - shielding, 300 - physical attack stuff).

Plasma Blaster: 
>How does it home in? Zig-zagging quick turns? Or does it curve slowly and struggle at turning corners?
>Can he move or do anything while charging the shots, or does he just have to hold down the trigger?
>You're charging for 5 seconds, these are going to be stronger than a punch. You don't need a comment on damage, but if you want one just say the shots are powerful.
>How big are the blasts?
>1/10 of the speed of an arrow is very slow. Most people can run faster than that.

Arm Blade:
>How long is the blade?
>Can he do anything while materialising it? Does he have to stand still? Or can he run about?
>This doesn't need area attack, it's a sword-arm thing - not an explosion.
>This would only cost 300 OM.
>Your iron body lasts for 10 seconds. This takes 9 seconds to make. You'll only get 1 second of usage. Just change it to let him use it whenever or something, or cut down the time it takes to make,


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