07-17-2018, 10:02 PM
(07-13-2018, 05:12 PM)Jack Spicer Wrote: DOM - Iron Body (Physical Strength, Area Defense, Area Attack, 600 OM):
[spoiler]A Technique Jack perfected based off of the "Metal Weapons" that he seemed to be able to do. It's not so much a technique per say as him pushing a button on his watch. When he does activate this, it takes 7 seconds. A gun metal gray exoskeleton made out of Iron will form over his body, for his own use. When this forms, it can last at maximum up to 10 seconds. It is capable of blocking most damage that is headed his way. When he is making this, Jack cannot move a muscle, much less attack or defend himself in the slightest. After this is made, however, Jack is free to attack. For the exoskeleton can be used as a weapon by Jack to deliver iron-reinforced kicks, punches, and headbutts.
This is moderately exhausting on the stamina of Jack to use, akin to a light workout.[/spoiler]
DOM - Iron Body - Arm Blade (300 OM, Requires Iron Body, Physical Strength):
[spoiler]Should he be unable to hold a weapon, Jack can choose to replace one of his arms with a blade made out of metal that will appear over the hand of him. This takes 30 seconds, and can only be done when he is using Iron Body. The blade can clash with all manner of swords, and that includes lightsabers without breaking. The blade can be used to cut a swath of destruction through vehicles, and generally anything else in his path. The blade does not fade.[/spoiler]
Iron Body: Looks good, but doesn't need area attack (just physical and area defence).
Arm Blade:
>How long is the blade?
"This takes 30 seconds, and can only be done when he is using Iron Body."
>I'd advise you to decrease the time down to 3 seconds or something, and also let him use this whenever.
"The blade can be used to cut a swath of destruction through vehicles, and generally anything else in his path."
>Remove this. It's dependant on your ATK.
(07-14-2018, 10:48 PM)Jack Spicer Wrote: S.T. Blaster Pistol MK I - Hold Out Blaster Original (300 OM, Ranged Proficiency):
[spoiler]The S.T. Blaster Pistol MK I - Hold Out Blaster is a device that was created by Jack Spicer as a means of earning income by providing an affordable alternative to some of the more expensive blaster pistols out there. This appears to be made out of a bronze metal. This prototype was the original that Jack Spicer personally hand - made for himself. It takes him roughly 10 seconds during which he cannot move or attack at all, to summon the pistol to his hands. As the original blaster pistol, should this be stolen he could only make a mass produced version of this instead of the original. Each of them can hold 5 shots, before the power pack of the blasters has to be replaced. The blasts travel at 1 / 5th the speed of an arrow. In return these possess the firepower needed to make a sizable pothole in concrete.
Each power pack takes about 7 seconds to make another of. Loading it takes 3 seconds. During this time the person is completely defenseless, unable to move, or do anything at all.[/spoiler]
Blaster Pistol:
>The shots are pretty slow and it takes you a long time to create/get more ammo. So, while powerful, I question how much use this could reasonably get.
"In return these possess the firepower needed to make a sizable pothole in concrete."
>Also, you should remove this bit. The strength of the shots are based off your ATK. Just say the shots are very powerful. (Although, yes, you can probably smash concrete with it)

