07-12-2018, 10:32 AM
(07-11-2018, 10:10 PM)Jack Spicer Wrote: Metal Weapons (1200 OM, Physical Strength):
Jack can create melee weapons from Metal in most forms that a melee weapon can come in. These can be short (like a dagger), medium (like a sword) or long (like a spear) in length. The weapons are permanent. Making one takes about 3 seconds for Jack Spicer. This is an ability Jack Spicer has because he is the Heylin Dragon of Metal. The weapons can dissipate if broken, or if Jack wishes to use another ability. At the cost of greater fatigue, Jack can pour more of his power into the metal weapons, increasing the strength, and damage they could do.
>Can he move while making a weapon?
>This might sound dumb, but does he actually need a supply of metal for this or can he just do it anywhere? I'd go for the latter option of I were you, unless you want the former as an IC restriction.
"The weapons can dissipate if broken, or if Jack wishes to use another ability."
>You can remove this line. Maybe replace it with something like this if you really want, but you don't have to: "Jack can instantly dissipate the weapons if he wishes."
"At the cost of greater fatigue, Jack can pour more of his power into the metal weapons, increasing the strength, and damage they could do."
>If I were you, I'd just cut this bit out too. And then get another move that lets you do a power attack or hit something a bit harder with your melee weapons.