07-11-2018, 09:46 PM
(07-11-2018, 09:29 PM)Jack Spicer Wrote: Metal Weapons (900 OM, Physical Strength):
Jack can create melee weapons from Metal in most forms that a melee weapon can come in. These can be short (like a dagger), medium (like a sword) or long (like a spear) in length. The more energy he puts into these weapons, the harder they are to break but the more physically and mentally exhausted he becomes. These weapons will immediately dissipate upon his breaking his concentration for any reason. This is a technique he will discover he has as the Heylin Dragon of Metal.
Steel Soul (300 OM, Physical Strength.):
Steel Soul is a weapon Jack created for his primary use in melee combat. A katana that resembles the Blade of the Nebula and Sword of the Storm from back home, this sword is about 3 - 5 feet long in the blade, at most. A sword that was created out of volcanic crystal and laser sharpened by Jack at his fortress. This sword can clash with swords of similar quality, and is a weapon that Jack takes great pride in.
Metal Weapons:
>How long does it take to make the weapons?
>If you want to make them stronger at the cost of fatigue, that's another variability so this would cost 300 more OM (1200 OM total).
>If I were you, I'd just cut out the stuff about concentration, durability, and energy costs - and just have the weapons last almost indefinitely after their creation. That's perfectly acceptable.
Steel Soul: I'm confused. Why would you want this move when your "metal weapons" move lets you create things just like it? Also, while rough measurements are fine for weapon sizes, "3 to 5ft" is a bit too large of a variance. Be a bit more specific. Like "about 4ft".
As for your gauntlet, I believe you already got a gauntlet move approved a while back (either for Warren or for Raf - maybe someone else). I suggest you just find that and copy it over for Jack.