Score Cards

[Karl Jak]

Fight 16 Whirda/Yuuka vs Cell/Ricter

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Whirda and Yuuka -- Both doing solid, and it's clear that you both found a seriously absurd gimmick and made it work.  It also helps that you're both solid writers and could probably make Plastic Bags look hip and cool.  Kudos, lol.  

Cell - Again, I'm pretty sure your first post was, without a doubt, one of the best things I've read thus far in this round.  Just such a well-written blend of zany and serious that fits in so well in this absurd, multiverse-world.  I have a soft spot for characters that engage with the lunacy that is the Omniverse (literally that's like 40% of Android 17).

Ricter - Some steps up here, honestly.  You still have some stuff that stuck out, but very little of it was jarring to the point of incomprehension.  (as an aside, though, I think the word you were looking for was 'stoat' (a weasel relative) rather than 'stout' (a delicious and savory beer type that all people should love)
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