Score Cards

[Karl Jak]

Fight B Ok Dongja/Marisa vs Ahana/Larva

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Ahana and Larva -- No real complaints. Both around-ish the same spot as last time. I felt like Larva had a nice spotlight this time.
Ok Dongja -- A very strange writing convention. Technically, quite sound, but it was a bit strange nevertheless. Nice way to really take the gimmick and run with it, though.
Marisa -- A step up. Still some minor stuff you should focus on, and if you really wanna dig your hands into improvement, I'd check out stuff like comma rules/sentence structure. Help take your writing to the next level.
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