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#15
Fight C Link/Clownpiece vs Pennywise/Shantotto

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...I chopped off the labels, it would seem, but it's the same order as I have it typed in the previous cards.

Pennywise -- Your first post was pretty stellar.  You handled a lot of moving parts in a manner that wasn't convoluted.
Link -- A solid job here and a step up from the previous round.  Unofficial bonus points for including that cute easter egg.
Shantotto -- Not sure if this was the best setting but you worked hard to make it work for your girl.
Clownpiece -- Nice ending post, at least from a narrative structure.

Overall -- If I have to read about ash or soot or cinders or sulfurous stentches in the next few months, it will be too soon.

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Score Cards - by Karl Jak - 06-14-2018, 11:11 AM

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