Score Cards

[Karl Jak]

Fight D Jibril/Harley Quinn vs Victor/Retane

[spoiler]
Jibril
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 2 / 3
Characterization – 2 / 2
Story – 2 / 2
Technical – 2 / 2
Overall Average = 2.3
Notes -> Solid steps up.  I hope that Jibril isn’t doomed to the bin of one-offs, because I do really like how different this is from the other characters I’ve seen you write/portray on the Omniverse.

Harley Quinn
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization – 4 / 4
Story – 3 / 3
Technical – 3 / 3
Overall Average = 3.2
Notes -> Yea, I can safely say that your first post made Victor into the creepiest dude in the Omniverse, and you do a good job building a nice team dynamic between the two of you – “my angel sent from heaven”, little stuff like that which helped to sell the duo.

Victor
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization – 3 / 3
Story – 3 / 3
Technical – 2 / 2
Overall Average = 2.8
Notes -> More or less the same from the first round.  The spacing thing bothers me on a personal level =p

Retane
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization – 3 / 3
Story – 2.5 / 3
Technical – 2 / 2
Overall Average = 2.75
Notes -> “that feeling when you expect grimdark Retane and you get zany, Pokemon trainer Retane” … it worked, although some of your humor doesn’t quite hit the mark.[/spoiler]