Score Cards

[Karl Jak]

Fight #13 Skeletor/Kuzuru vs Amber/Broly

[spoiler]
Skeletor
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization – 3 / 3
Story – 3 / 3
Technical – 2 / 2
Overall Average = 2.8
Notes -> As always, this stuff is solid and your character easily stood out among the rabble. The part at the beginning with He-Man had me chuckling.

Kuzuru
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization – 3 / 3
Story – 2 / 3
Technical – 2 / 2
Overall Average = 2.7
Notes -> I feel like I need to go back and read more Kuzuru. I wasn’t aware that he was such a sarcastic asshole, I always thought he was more of a generic asshole villain-type.

Amber
Clarity/Description – 2 / 3
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization – 3 / 3
Story – 2 / 3
Technical – 2 / 2
Overall Average = 2.6
Notes -> Not a bad performance, despite the variables thrown at you. I’d try and experiment more with paragraph structure. Some blockiness going on.

Broly
Withdrew

Overall – I had a laugh when all the horses had names. That was cute. The “entire fight stuck to a horse [most of the time?]” trope played out just as awkwardly and amusingly as I had hoped.[/spoiler]