07-09-2018, 06:05 AM
Red Fender Mustang Bass:
>As you can't use the actual guitar for anything (like hit people with it), this would only cost 600 OM (300 OM for each variant). We don't make you pay 300 OM for a gun, and then another 300 OM for having bullets for it.
>D-Note: I'd say the degree at which someone is pushed back would actually be your ATK vs their DEF. Fast but light birds can really struggle to fly against winds that us slower humans can more happily jog against, if you wanted a brief justification. SPD might help someone run towards you, but it won't let them resist the actual wind.
>Can you clarify roughly how fast he plays the notes? Like, "about 1 every X seconds" or "about X every second". The move description is unclear whether you're spamming out loads, or doing one every few seconds.
>Why does this need area defense, debuff, or ranged materialise?
>I can't see any "shielding" aspect of your move.
>Pushing someone back is not a debuff. It's just a push.
>The letters appear within 5ft of the guitar, so this doesn't need ranged materialise.
~Changing cost from 900 to 600
~D-note can be played continuously as it only forms an inconvenience. Playing these notes does drain his stamina. Depending on how many "special notes" he plays determin how fast his fatigue runs out. He then will be able to play the bass but he wont be able to combine his vegan powers with it. A-note is an actual attack and like a gun, he is able to shoot six of them rapidly before his vegan power needs to recharge (reload). If he shoots thrm at a slower pase....say once every 10 seconds, he does not need to charge his vegan powers.
~The proficiencies are for future addings once i have more OM. So they will get used.
Vegan protection shield:
>If you want to magically pick someone up or do anything more than just halt/block/knock an attack away, like in the gif you provided, that will need telekinesis.
>Otherwise, if you're just halting attacks, that will need physical attack (but telekinesis is acceptable instead).
>Can you elaborate on what you mean by deflect? The description is unclear about what actually happens after he stops an attack. Does he toss it to the side?
>This will need a fatigue cost as a drawback, otherwise stronger attacks will break through.
>Trixie has a similar move, which may be useful if you wish to compare. It needs physical attack but no other profs/powers:
[spoiler]
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Close Quarters Shielding or CQS is an ability that Trixie developed in the Underverse to counter and deflect attacks in the absence of her light-saber. Using her thorough and extensive knowledge of the force Trixie can generate a small invisible barrier that coalesces around her hands. By pointing her open palm towards the attack or incoming projectile she wishes to defend against the densely clustered force energy around her hands can halt or divert melee and ranged attacks. The shield can only take one hit before the ambient force dissipates and needs to be re-summoned, which forces Trixie to recoil her arm and push forward with an open palm once again. While melee attacks can be abruptly stopped just short of her chosen hand, caught in the suspended force energy, ranged projectiles and attacks are disintegrated or diverted away. It can be used in relatively quick succession allowing her to block multiple attacks in a row, but requires a moderate amount of concentration and energy. Extended use would drain Trixie’s stamina rather fast if all she did was defend in a hand to hand fight. [/spoiler]
~Basically the same move. will re-word it.
Note Crash:
>Be a bit more specific. How far would someone be blown back - roughly - if their DEF is equal to your ATK?
~ On equal terms i'd say 6 meters.
The narrator:
>As long as you don't reveal something about another character that Todd shouldn't know (without OOC permission), you'll be good here. So, as an example, if Todd met Ash, you couldn't have the text say "real name: Emma Shutter". And so on. Unless the character's writer gives permission. (Even if Todd himself can't see the Narrator stuff)
~obviously, no 4th walling or meta gaming.
All changes will be done once i am behind a computer.
>As you can't use the actual guitar for anything (like hit people with it), this would only cost 600 OM (300 OM for each variant). We don't make you pay 300 OM for a gun, and then another 300 OM for having bullets for it.
>D-Note: I'd say the degree at which someone is pushed back would actually be your ATK vs their DEF. Fast but light birds can really struggle to fly against winds that us slower humans can more happily jog against, if you wanted a brief justification. SPD might help someone run towards you, but it won't let them resist the actual wind.
>Can you clarify roughly how fast he plays the notes? Like, "about 1 every X seconds" or "about X every second". The move description is unclear whether you're spamming out loads, or doing one every few seconds.
>Why does this need area defense, debuff, or ranged materialise?
>I can't see any "shielding" aspect of your move.
>Pushing someone back is not a debuff. It's just a push.
>The letters appear within 5ft of the guitar, so this doesn't need ranged materialise.
~Changing cost from 900 to 600
~D-note can be played continuously as it only forms an inconvenience. Playing these notes does drain his stamina. Depending on how many "special notes" he plays determin how fast his fatigue runs out. He then will be able to play the bass but he wont be able to combine his vegan powers with it. A-note is an actual attack and like a gun, he is able to shoot six of them rapidly before his vegan power needs to recharge (reload). If he shoots thrm at a slower pase....say once every 10 seconds, he does not need to charge his vegan powers.
~The proficiencies are for future addings once i have more OM. So they will get used.
Vegan protection shield:
>If you want to magically pick someone up or do anything more than just halt/block/knock an attack away, like in the gif you provided, that will need telekinesis.
>Otherwise, if you're just halting attacks, that will need physical attack (but telekinesis is acceptable instead).
>Can you elaborate on what you mean by deflect? The description is unclear about what actually happens after he stops an attack. Does he toss it to the side?
>This will need a fatigue cost as a drawback, otherwise stronger attacks will break through.
>Trixie has a similar move, which may be useful if you wish to compare. It needs physical attack but no other profs/powers:
[spoiler]
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Quote:[url=http://i.imgur.com/w9m41r8.jpg]Close Quarters Shielding:
Close Quarters Shielding or CQS is an ability that Trixie developed in the Underverse to counter and deflect attacks in the absence of her light-saber. Using her thorough and extensive knowledge of the force Trixie can generate a small invisible barrier that coalesces around her hands. By pointing her open palm towards the attack or incoming projectile she wishes to defend against the densely clustered force energy around her hands can halt or divert melee and ranged attacks. The shield can only take one hit before the ambient force dissipates and needs to be re-summoned, which forces Trixie to recoil her arm and push forward with an open palm once again. While melee attacks can be abruptly stopped just short of her chosen hand, caught in the suspended force energy, ranged projectiles and attacks are disintegrated or diverted away. It can be used in relatively quick succession allowing her to block multiple attacks in a row, but requires a moderate amount of concentration and energy. Extended use would drain Trixie’s stamina rather fast if all she did was defend in a hand to hand fight. [/spoiler]
~Basically the same move. will re-word it.
Note Crash:
>Be a bit more specific. How far would someone be blown back - roughly - if their DEF is equal to your ATK?
~ On equal terms i'd say 6 meters.
The narrator:
>As long as you don't reveal something about another character that Todd shouldn't know (without OOC permission), you'll be good here. So, as an example, if Todd met Ash, you couldn't have the text say "real name: Emma Shutter". And so on. Unless the character's writer gives permission. (Even if Todd himself can't see the Narrator stuff)
~obviously, no 4th walling or meta gaming.
All changes will be done once i am behind a computer.
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