07-06-2018, 04:17 PM
I really don't think that an overhaul would be the best, if I'm honest. I believ the core of the system is good.
I think 2 major factors of the system need ot be tightened up and polished:
1: What counts as a "variable"
2: What details are pertinent for other writers to know about a move.
These are my ideas as of thus far:
1: A variable is something that adds narrative functionality outside of the powers that you already have.
Just as a rough, unpolished stream of thought for 2:
What does it look like?
If it's a physical object, what are some of the important dimensions?
If it's something that doesn't appear in the real world, what's important for us to know about how it operates?
What happens if you are targeted by this move (outside of the expected)?
What are some of the downsides (if it's beyond what we expect)?
What is it especially good at doing (if it does anything beyond what we expect)?
I think 2 major factors of the system need ot be tightened up and polished:
1: What counts as a "variable"
2: What details are pertinent for other writers to know about a move.
These are my ideas as of thus far:
1: A variable is something that adds narrative functionality outside of the powers that you already have.
Just as a rough, unpolished stream of thought for 2:
What does it look like?
If it's a physical object, what are some of the important dimensions?
If it's something that doesn't appear in the real world, what's important for us to know about how it operates?
What happens if you are targeted by this move (outside of the expected)?
What are some of the downsides (if it's beyond what we expect)?
What is it especially good at doing (if it does anything beyond what we expect)?