07-06-2018, 11:06 AM
(This post was last modified: 07-06-2018, 11:07 AM by Dane Regan.)
(07-06-2018, 11:00 AM)Schwi Dola Wrote: I'm not sure half of the moves in this list would pass current Move Approval. Due to lack of detail.
You're right there. Most are somewhat fine, actually. But one or two need minor tweaks. Just because a move is short doesn't mean it doesn't have all the required details. Like, for example, this is pretty short compared to other recent moves, but also totally fine:
[spoiler]Frostfire (requires Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) – 300 OM
Sub-Zero charges up for a half-second - which slows him to half speed - before firing a super-cold ball of energy at his opponent. It's about the size of a hand, ice-blue, and flies as fast as an arrow. It hurts, and can temporarily immobilize a hand or leg (for up to a second, depending upon the user's ATK/TEC and the defender's DEF/TEC. With equal values, it's only about a half-second) leaving an opponent open to a follow-up combination.[/spoiler]