Score Cards

[Karl Jak]

Fight #3 Link/Clownpiece vs Skeletor/Kuzuru

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Link
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization –  3 / 3
Story – 2 / 3
Technical – 2 / 2
Overall Average = 2.7
Notes -> I enjoy that you’re a silent protagonist – I was waiting to see if you’d break that some point. Hell, I don’t even think the boy had thoughts.  That’s commitment.

Clownpiece
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization – 2 / 3
Story – 2 / 3
Technical – 3 / 2
Overall Average = 2.7
Notes -> I like your character design, and you did a good job of using that to accentuate the scenes.  It goes without saying that your next fight is one that I look forward to, given the participants.

Skeletor
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization – 3 / 3
Story – 3 / 2
Technical – 3 / 2
Overall Average = 2.8
Notes -> Myah!

Kuzuru
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 3 / 4
Characterization – 3 / 4
Story – 2 / 2
Technical – 2 / 3
Overall Average = 2.9
Notes -> Why do all your characters have to like, self-harm themselves?  Is this a plea for help?[/spoiler]