Score Cards

[Karl Jak]

Fight #6 Erik/Deadpool vs Dave/Kenpachi

[spoiler]
Erik
Clarity/Description – 2 / 2
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization – 3 / 3
Story – 2 / 3
Technical – 2 / 2
Overall Average = 2.5
Notes -> Lots of growth from when I remember you getting slaughtered by marines or from when you first started out (https://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=3371)

Deadpool
Clarity/Description – 2 / 3
Voice – 3 / 4
Characterization – 3 / 4
Story – 3 / 3
Technical – 2 / 3
Overall Average = 3
Notes -> First post was rushed, but I think you’re aware of that. For what it’s worth, the second was what I’d come to expect from you. Don’t rush your posts next round.

Dave
Clarity/Description – 2 / 2
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization – 3 / 3
Story – 3 / 3
Technical – 2 / 3
Overall Average = 2.7
Notes -> This might be one of the few occasions where I’ve read your writing, especially for Dave. It doesn’t disappoint, and I find it amusing that you write a DJ character in a relatively non-absurdist manner.

Kenpachi
Clarity/Description – 3 / 4
Voice – 3 / 4
Characterization – 3 / 3
Story – 3 / 3
Technical – 3 / 3
Overall Average = 3.2
Notes -> Believe it or not, there was a time when Mark “The Terminator” Kenpachi was a human (http://www.cytokineindustries.com/index....d-sixteen/). You might be the only returning person who didn’t seem to have any rust at all, and you did it with a relatively new character. Solid.

Notes @ everyone – Leave the fourth wall alone. It cries. Way too much. [/spoiler]