Score Cards

[Karl Jak]

Fight #4 Retane/Victor vs Broly/Amber

[spoiler]
Retane
Clarity/Description – 2 / 2
Voice – 2 / 3
Characterization –  2 / 3
Story – 2 / 2
Technical – 2 / 2
Notes: I expected more rust on you, but your posts didn’t harbor any grievous technical gaffes (which I think everyone probably expected).  Like everyone in this fight, I think it took you a little too long to warm up. I want to see angry, incensed, driven Retane next round.

Victor
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 3 / 3
Characterization –  3 / 3
Story – 2 / 3
Technical – 2 / 2
Notes:  In a perfect world, Victor would win and the other three would have to fight to the death.  Victor’s a very unique character, and it just amuses me/entertains me to no end the difference between this Victor and the Victor who walked into DA15 with his weird, fucking rainbow text. I think your team’ll be a scary draw for whoever you pair up against – I pity those people, lol.

Broly
Clarity/Description – 3 / 3
Voice – 2 / 3
Characterization –  2 / 3
Story – 2 / 3
Technical – 3 / 2
Notes: Like everyone else, I think you laid an egg in the first round. The post was technically sound, but not your best outputting.  Your second round post helped to make up for it.  Try and incorporate more of Broly into your next bout.  I know you have a unique take on the character, so try and take advantage of that.  

Amber
Clarity/Description – 2 / 2
Voice – 2 / 2.5
Characterization –  3 / 3
Story – 3 / 3
Technical – 2 / 2
Notes: Amber is generally still the same Amber that got sick, degraded, and eventually became a raving monster.  Like everyone in this fight with the exception of Victor, I think you had a little rust in your opening post, but you rebounded. [/spoiler]