06-12-2018, 02:49 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-12-2018, 02:49 PM by Dane Regan.)
(06-08-2018, 08:19 AM)Jack Darby Wrote: Forge of Solus Prime(600?; Requires Mimic, Buff)
The Forge of Solus Prime was a weapon of the Primes that could be used by Solus Prime and was, in fact, her signature relic. This allowed her to Smith fine blades like the Star Saber, armor such as the Apex Armor, and many other weapons. The Forge of Solus Prime has retained that power in the Omniverse, allowing Jack to craft weapons for others, and even transfer a copy of his moves to his allies. To do this, he takes ten seconds to quickly summon the hammer and an anvil, taking a singular weapon and setting it on the anvil before charging up with an overhead smash. This adjusts the weapon to be able to be used by a specified ally. However, this comes at a cost. When he has transferred a move, he cannot use the move for the rest of a battle, even if the move in question is not being used. This also transfers any moves that are connected to the the move he is transferring. Outside of combat the hammer can be used to create items for flavor purposes, but also to create new tools for himself, as well as new weapons. (Fodder) This move cannot be used in any form of combat - cannot be used to attack an opponent. Furthermore, he can only use the item on one move set per fight. If he tries to do more than that, the Forge shatters. The individual he transfers the moves to would only get 3 uses of each weapon / move before the weapon would fade, and he would have to re-transfer it. After the 3 uses, though he must also recreate the Forge which takes about 15 seconds during which he cannot move, attack, block, dodge, or do anything else.
You're overcomplicating this, and from what I can gather this would only cost 300 OM. The using it to replicate moves for you to buy is fodder and doesn't cost OM (as you're already spending the OM to buy the stuff).
I suggest you rewrite this since there's a lot of content that isn't strictly needed, it's way to hard to use IC for what it is (you've got a lot of charge times stacked against yourself). Either rewrite it here, or in the workshop if you're uncertain. Drawback-wise, just have Jack spend 5 seconds at an Anvil, then have him grant someone the weapon for the next minute or so at the cost of not being able to use it himself. That should be a fair baseline - you don't need all the other complications you added.