Joining: Mordus Goldenmane

[PepsiYuuka]

Hello and welcome to the Omniverse! While for the most part the rest of your app looks great, your moves seem to need a little help along from the folks at Move Approval. While you won’t be able to use them until they’re approved, because your character has Physical Strength, you could technically start roleplaying without them too.

Before you do put them through there, here are some general things to fix or think about:

• All moves cost a multiple of 300 OM, depending on how many different ways the move can be used. A basic, simple move costs 300. Each additional “form” or “use” of the move costs an extra 300.
  
• The charge time on your fists move is really quite long at the higher end- since this is a D&D character, for example, 40 seconds would be nearly 7 rounds of combat. While technically you could still keep this the same, I just wanted to make sure you knew, comparatively, how long that was.
  
• There are moves similar to Spectral Limbs in approval now, so I’ll leave that one to them.
  
• As for the fireball move, since you mentioned that it functions like napalm- if you wanted a damage over time burning effect, you would have to purchase Debuff Proficiency. Also, if you would prefer that this move be much more powerful at the cost of being limited use, you could consider making it a Super Move.
  

While that sounds like a lot, as I mentioned, don’t worry too much- you can start writing out your first thread and posts of being brought to the Omniverse while you work on them if you’d prefer. You just can’t use these moves until they’re approved.

Your purchase log, where you’ll be posting the approval of your moves when you get it and such, is here. When you have a chance, you can go set up a thread titled with your character’s name in the Roster forum. The format for your first post is below, and as for the rest of it, feel free to peek through the rosters of the other folks on the site and pick and choose what you’d like to include!

Code:

Name: Magnus Goldenmane
Spent OM: 3000
Consumed OM: 0 (for OM spent on items items, or OM permanently lost from respecs or refunding purchases)
Proficiencies (2600): Physical Strength (1000), Ranged (1000), Remote Control (600)
Powers (400/8000): Master Acrobat (400)
Moves (0): (just the names and prices. You should list the full descriptions on other pages)
Super Moves (0): (like above, but also include the tiers)
Transformations (0): (just the names and prices. You should give full details of each transformation below your base character stats, or on other pages)
Assists (0): (just the names and prices, same rules as transformations)
Items: (list your current items)
Artefacts: (just your currently held artefacts, if any. If stored in a base, indicate as such here)
Bases: (enter locations of bases you own here)
Unlocks (0); (for stat upgrades, etc)
Base stats: 
ATK: 4
DEF: 1
SPD: 3
TEC: 2