Move Approval V

[Dane Regan]

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Forward: JUN (300) Requires Physical Strength, Burst Movement
This spell is cast immediately with no concentration. Dongja conjures the character for "Forward" in mid-air. At that moment, Dongja dashes in a direction of his choice exactly 10 feet (no more, no less) very, very fast. As long as there is direct path on the ground to his destination, he can move there; in other words, Dongja will have to be able to run there normally. Anything, or anyone, in his way take some minor damage from getting hit without slowing him down, and may get a little knocked back, but not likely. This move is a little exhausting, and has two charges. Each charge has a 6 second cooldown.


Tier 1 Super Utility
Word Magic - Slowness: JUH-SOHK(600) Requires Debuff, Time Manipulation
Dongja conjures the two characters that mean "Low" and "Speed" above in sequence for 8 seconds, causing them to appear in mid-air. Dongja then has to make contact with a single target with his palm within 3 seconds. If he lands the spell, the target's timeline starts passing more slowly, reducing their SPD by 2 and TEC by 2 until they next take damage (or until the end of the post). This move is very exhausting and requires quite a bit of concentration.


Tier 1 Super Defense
Word Magic – Shield: BANG-PAE (600) Requires Physical Strength
Dongja conjures the two characters that mean "Defense" and "Board" above in sequence instantaneously, causing them to appear in mid-air. A large ethereal tower shield appears on Dongja's arm, large enough to cover his entire body and then some. It can block attacks for a split second (basically enough to block a T1 Super Attack). It takes considerable concentration, to the point where Dongja is unable to do anything for a full second.[/spoiler]

Forward: JUN: Add in that this move counts as a use of burst movement (so you can't use this right after burst movement, or use one charge right after using another charge, or use burst movement right after using this - there's a second delay), and that it can get tiring if used repetitively (more so than burst movement). Then I think it'll be fine - balance wise. You can't go as far as burst movement usually allows (ish, depending on your SPD), but this move does allow for very quick dodging. Also, while I can guess what you mean, can you specify that this happens over "a small fraction of a second" or "almost an instant" or something - since very, very, fast is a bit too vague.

Word Magic - Slowness: JUH-SOHK: Add in that this is blockable by a T1 Super Defence (or higher), then I'll give you approval.

Word Magic – Shield: BANG-PAE: I added in a minor bolded comment to clarify it can only completely block T1 super attacks. With that in mind, approved. But if I were you I'd make it last a bit longer since many super attacks last longer than just a second or so.