06-04-2018, 02:28 PM
Green Lantern Power Ring Prototype (???, ???,???):
The Green Lantern Prototype was forged by Jack with the Forge of Solus Pirme. The ring is a prototype, and has many of the capabilities of a Green Lantern Ring. This acts as a Mobile Dataverse Device, and a Communicator. This ring is still capable of shooting green energy beams out of it. The beams appear to be fists made out of a green crystalline energy. They travel at the speed of an arrow. This can be used while moving, or with other moves. This is moderately draining, equivalent to a light work out when he uses it. Each blast has 5 seconds to cool down. It has a range of 75 feet. The ring was discovered somewhere in Camelot by Jack.
The Green Lantern Prototype was forged by Jack with the Forge of Solus Pirme. The ring is a prototype, and has many of the capabilities of a Green Lantern Ring. This acts as a Mobile Dataverse Device, and a Communicator. This ring is still capable of shooting green energy beams out of it. The beams appear to be fists made out of a green crystalline energy. They travel at the speed of an arrow. This can be used while moving, or with other moves. This is moderately draining, equivalent to a light work out when he uses it. Each blast has 5 seconds to cool down. It has a range of 75 feet. The ring was discovered somewhere in Camelot by Jack.
While not an ideal power ring, the ring has been picked up by him because he needs one. This is the typical attack mode of the ring. Jack Darby can summon objects with his ring to interact with and manipulate objects at range. These manipulations are analogous to the things that a person with two large hands could feasibly complete (moving, pushing, pulling, pressing, turning, etc). These objects have superficial images associated with them, always in the form of an object that is completing the task. If the object is grabbing and moving another thing, it will have a "grasping" mechanic, be it a hand, a mouth, a clamp, a claw, etc. These images are purely illusory, and the strength of the object is always the same. That means that a Construct shaped like a hand and a Construct shaped like a crowbar are equally good at prying something open and etc.
These grabbing constructs appear as a tendril of rope-like light that extends from Jack's power ring, ending in the chosen 'grabber'. They can extend as far as Jack's concentration allows, but the longer the grabber, the more easily it is broken. His constructs are colored emerald. While these objects are illusory and can fulfill only one purpose, they can be attacked, damaged and destroyed. The more damage they take, the more strain it puts on Jack's mind. The more energy he puts into these objects, the harder they are to break but the more physically and mentally exhausted he becomes. These objects will immediately dissipate upon his breaking his concentration for any reason. Maximum range of ~30 meters (~100 feet) This is the 2nd ability of the ring.
The ring can also shoot a beam of energy that can lift objects around an opponent, and use them as projectiles traveling at the speed of an arrow. Alternately these objects can also be used to bludgeon his opponent, smashing the objects into their head with the beam from the ring.
Another way the ring could be used is that it could be used to create a Green Energy Shield around him capable of nullifying non - super moves provided his DEF / Tec be high enough to do so. This takes about 7 seconds to activate.
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