Move Approval V

[Dane Regan]

Unstable Emerald Construct Fist (600, Physical Strength, Ranged Prof, Ranged Materialize Prof, Remote Control Prof): 
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An energy fist that is about the size of a mini van that Jack can create. By means of the ring he wears he is capable of using the fist in two different ways. 

• Physical: The Fist will be used by him to deliver an upper cut to an opponent. This takes 5 seconds to charge up before he can perform. When this is being done he can use other moves, and can move around. However, he cannot use other moves that involve the Oan Power Ring. This is moderately exhausting, akin to a light work out. The fist could be broken easily. The fist appears over his ring hand, and he can use it for melee. It can be used with other moves, and he can move around. 
  

• Fist Missile:  A missile version of the Fist. This travels at the speed of an arrow. Takes him about 10 seconds to create the Fist Missile with his ring. The missile can be controlled by Jack remotely, and materializes out of the ring. The missile does a high amount of damage when it impacts with an opponent. The missile could be broken easily. This appears about 1 foot away from his hand before rocketing towards an opponent.  When he is using this he cannot use other moves that involve the Oan Power Ring. He is free to move around or use other weapons, other than the Oan Power Ring, or moves that are not connected. While charging this he is free to do whatever he wants. [/spoiler]
  

Understand that your charge times are mostly meaningless and will result in fairly weak moves as you can do basically anything else while charging them. The main points of most charge times are "I do X seconds of damage/effects at once" and "I had to leave myself open for a while to execute this, so this attack will be stronger". Anyway:

>Give a specific size, "mini van" is not good enough because minivans vary in size by quite a bit. Also, that's pretty big for a fist, firing it would look silly, and getting it low enough to uppercut someone would be near impossible.
>Physical: At the start of the move, it's phrased like a single-use fist that just uppercuts someone. Later, you write it like it's a melee weapon. Which is it?
>Fist Missile: This bit is fine.