06-02-2018, 03:36 PM
@Sam: Cool, make sure to add any changes into your moves next time so I can approve the final version. I have a couple of comments though:
In that case, I think 15 seconds to keep someone trapped is a bit too long, since you're doing some damage to people (with the burning), and it'd probably be hard for them to charge an attack to break out quick-ish if they can't really use their arms. Since my concern here is you wrapping the chains around someone and attacking them while they're defenceless in addition to them taking the burning damage.
I'd rather have some actual numbers here. Maybe 2.5ft for the handle and the axe head extending 6 inches or so from the handle?
Just add something into the move to say it can hit people as it's returning. Tearing through people probably isn't going to happen outside of fighting NPCs and as a finisher move though - obviously. But having it fly back towards you and hit someone on the way is fine.
(06-02-2018, 03:12 PM)Sam Wrote: Yes, but the hand that the chains are bound (since he has two) will be immobilized while he is holding someone
In that case, I think 15 seconds to keep someone trapped is a bit too long, since you're doing some damage to people (with the burning), and it'd probably be hard for them to charge an attack to break out quick-ish if they can't really use their arms. Since my concern here is you wrapping the chains around someone and attacking them while they're defenceless in addition to them taking the burning damage.
(06-02-2018, 03:12 PM)Sam Wrote: GOOD QUESTION, about the size of his arm for the handle, the axe blade part is about the size of a grown man's face. (Kratos's face)
I'd rather have some actual numbers here. Maybe 2.5ft for the handle and the axe head extending 6 inches or so from the handle?
(06-02-2018, 03:12 PM)Sam Wrote: I would like that to be an option, to have it tear through people /rebound through people.
Just add something into the move to say it can hit people as it's returning. Tearing through people probably isn't going to happen outside of fighting NPCs and as a finisher move though - obviously. But having it fly back towards you and hit someone on the way is fine.