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Move Approval V
(06-02-2018, 02:45 PM)Gildarts Wrote: These moves are for Kratos, my new NPC for DA

Moves:
[spoiler]
Bound in Chains: 600 OM

ranged, remote control, physical, area attack profs, debuff prof

Buried inside both of Kratos’ forearms are iron chains, they often flame when they accumulate speed and the smoldering chains are whipped with such force that it slams into an enemy with enormous power and force. These chains can range up to 10-15 feet.

They can cause him pain whenever he uses them, move somewhat slowly through the air, and take at least 3 seconds for them to recoil in order to be issued again (revolve in the air, accumulate speed and fire).

Debuff Chains: Same move, same chains, but when an item or player is near, they can be bound by the chains, which will immobilize the player until they have struck the chains with a heavy force (at one specific link in order to break the chains) or be immobilized for 15 seconds. The chains will burn into their flesh because of the heat, but I only see it doing surface damage.


God Slaying Blades: 600 OM
Physical, debuff

https://i.ytimg.com/vi/ibfkacdW_x8/maxresdefault.jpg

Two dual blades replace the chains in his hands, they are pretty wide and resemble curve shaped clevers, and they are often covered in flames, from the fury and anger of the spartan who fights with unquenchable anger. Kratos uses these blades often in rapid succession and this is a more agile move for him. He need not stop and aim one blade, but rather both motions dance together and allow for a speedy, precise attack. The 600 is priced because the flames can leap off the blades and catch fire on an enemy’s clothes, as well as just inflict extra fire damage.


Leviathan Axe: 600 OM
homing, ranged

https://i.ytimg.com/vi/iJLUFFYd-pM/maxresdefault.jpg

Kratos aims for 5 seconds, whips back his stone axe, and releases it in a boomerang-fashion, it swirls and twirls in the air as though tracing the source of its target and finally lands at the targeted being/item, blade first.

This blade also returns to Kratos’ hands on command (much like Thor!) after at least 10 seconds of waiting.


Super moves: T1: Lightning of Zeus 600 OM (ranged, debuff)

Lightning of Zeus requires striking precision (or uses a means around this/ conductible) Kratos readies the power in his hand, charging and immersing himself with the fury and power of Zeus, feels the static suck from the air and then, as his hand glows a crystallized blue, and branches of electricity crawl up his chained arm.

Kratos gets in a good stance to throw his ray of lightning and it is lobbed through the air at an enemy, shocking them with painful, raw power lasting for 3-5 forceful seconds. It may take a few more seconds for the enemy to recover full control of their body/motor functions.


Transformations: Kratos becomes engulfed in flames of war, (imagery could allude to anger, but also the fiery death he cursed his family to). T1 transformation - Spartan Rage

ATK: 4 (N/A)
DEF: 2 (+2)
SPD:2 (+2)
TEC: 2 (+1)[/spoiler]

Bound in Chains:
>This doesn't need area attack, as far as I can see. You're just swinging chains around.
>How durable are the chains? How hard are they to break? Since that's the main way of escaping being bound.
>Can Kratos do anything else while someone is restrained by his chains?

God Slaying Blades:
>If the blades are always burning and doing fire damage, this would only cost 300 OM (since it's not variable - it just does 2 things at once, hit and burn)
>How big are the swords?

Leviathan Axe:
>How big is the axe?
>How fast does the axe travel? (Or just, usual throw object speed?)
>Having your thrown axe return to your hand won't cost you another 300 OM, I'd say. Unless you plan to hit people with it as it returns or something.

Lightning of Zeus: Approved.

Spartan Rage: This T1 power-up is approved (and costs 1000 OM), but note that the war flames he's coated in won't damage anyone unless you get a move for them or something like that.

(06-02-2018, 02:58 PM)Jack Darby Wrote: Unstable Emerald Construct Fist (600, Physical Strength, Ranged Prof, Ranged Materialize Prof, Remote Control Prof): 
[spoiler]
An energy fist that is about the size of a mini van that Jack can create. By means of the ring he wears he is capable of using the fist in two different ways. 
  • Physical: The Fist will be used by him to deliver an upper cut to an opponent. This takes 5 seconds to charge up before he can perform. When this is being done he can use other moves, and can move around. However, he cannot use other moves that involve the Oan Power Ring. This is moderately exhausting, akin to a light work out. The fist could be broken easily. 
  • Fist Missile:  A missile version of the Fist. This travels at the speed of an arrow. Takes him about 10 seconds to create the Fist Missile with his ring. The missile can be controlled by Jack remotely, and materializes out of the ring. The missile does a high amount of damage when it impacts with an opponent. The missile could be broken easily. This appears about 1 foot away from his hand before rocketing towards an opponent.  When he is using this he cannot use other moves that involve the Oan Power Ring. He is free to move around or use other weapons, other than the Oan Power Ring, or moves that are not connected. 
    [/spoiler]

Physical: As I said last time:
Quote:Where does the fist appear? Below someone's chin? Or does it fly at them from you?

Fist Missile: And, again:
Quote:Can he do anything while charging this?


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