06-01-2018, 10:41 PM
(06-01-2018, 10:32 PM)Jack Darby Wrote: Unstable Construct - Emerald Revolver (300, Ranged Proficiency):
An unstable construct that pulsates with barely contained Emerald Energy. This revolver can at present only hold 3 shots. The shots are capable of moving at the speed of regular bullets. This construct takes him ten seconds to make. In addition, reloading the construct takes about 7 seconds. This can be used with other moves, but has a chance of misfiring if he does so. It can be used while moving around. The pistols look like traditional revolvers made out of green crystal that has cracks all over it, but are partially made out of energy. While this is being created he can use other moves, or dodge. The three shots can be fired one every 5 seconds.
Unstable Emerald Blast Wave (300, Ranged, Ranged Materialize, Area Attack):
Pressing the Oan Power ring to his chest for 7 seconds, and then pointing it outwards, Jack will release a blast wave that is moderately damaging. This requires his full concentration, and that he stay stationary to do it. The blast wave lasts for 10 seconds, and travels for about 30 feet in any direction. It's speed is that of a bullet. This is moderately taxing on his stamina, akin to a light work out. The blast wave is colored emerald and has an unstable feel to it, in terms of pulsating with staticky energy. The energy wave is clearly unstable. The blast wave is 10 feet in diameter. The blast does actual damage - heavy damage to any opponent that is hit by it.
Unstable Construct - Emerald Revolver: Approved, but I'd advise you look at some other gun moves or think about the numbers for the times you're using here.
Unstable Emerald Blast Wave:
>See the parts I underlined, you contradict yourself
"The blast wave is 10 feet in diameter"
>This doesn't make sense, since earlier you say the wave travels 30ft in any direction. Did you want it to explode out in a full circle? If so, just replace "any" with "every". If not, and it is meant to be a more cone or cylinder shaped wave, diameter isn't a good description by itself.