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Move Approval V
(05-31-2018, 04:18 PM)Jack Darby Wrote: Oan Power Ring (900, Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Control, Ranged Materialise): 

In the days of the original Green Lantern Corps, the Guardian known as Meadlux created a power ring specifically for the Guardians. An Oan power ring possessed the same capabilities as a standard ring, but was fueled by the internal power of its wielder and thus did not need to be recharged. Unlike the traditional Green Lantern Ring, an Oan ring did not contain the impurity that restricted its capabilities against materials colored yellow. The revelation that such a weapon existed caused a great schism within the ranks of the Green Lantern Corps. Officers who had lost close comrades due to adversaries empowered by yellow weaponry lost faith in the Guardians, some of whom, such as Galius Zed, Eddore and Kaylark even went so far as to turn their backs on the Guardians, coveting the rings for themselves. Another group of individuals who took an interest in the Oan rings were the space pirates known as the Free Lancers..In the Omniverse the ring may have lost it's properties, for the most part.  Jack does not like wielding the Oan Power Ring. 
  • This ring is still capable of shooting green energy beams out of it. The beams appear to be fists made out of a green crystalline energy. They travel at the speed of an arrow. This can be used while moving, or with other moves. This is moderately draining, equivalent to a light work out when he uses it. Each blast has 5 seconds to cool down. It has a range of 75 feet. The ring was discovered somewhere in Camelot by Jack. While not an ideal power ring, the ring has been picked up by him because he needs one. This is the typical attack mode of the ring. 
  • Jack Darby can summon objects with his ring to interact with and manipulate objects at range. These manipulations are analogous to the things that a person with two large hands could feasibly complete (moving, pushing, pulling, pressing, turning, etc). 

    These objects have superficial images associated with them, always in the form of an object that is completing the task. If the object is grabbing and moving another thing, it will have a "grasping" mechanic, be it a hand, a mouth, a clamp, a claw, etc. These images are purely illusory, and the strength of the object is always the same. That means that a Construct shaped like a hand and a Construct shaped like a crowbar are equally good at prying something open and etc. These grabbing constructs appear as a tendril of rope-like light that extends from Jack's power ring, ending in the chosen 'grabber'. They can extend as far as Jack's concentration allows, but the longer the grabber, the more easily it is broken. His constructs are colored emerald. 

    While these objects are illusory and can fulfill only one purpose, they can be attacked, damaged and destroyed. The more damage they take, the more strain it puts on Jack's mind. The more energy he puts into these objects, the harder they are to break but the more physically and mentally exhausted he becomes. These objects will immediately dissipate upon his breaking his concentration for any reason. Maximum range of ~30 meters (~100 feet) This is the 2nd ability of the ring.
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Jack/Warren, please keep all your old approval links. I'm fairly sure you've probably had this approved before. Just keep track of your old links and rebuy your old moves as needed. Either way, what I have in the above quote is approved. But note I made changes to the title (I shifted the required proficiencies) as you randomly put one move title inside another.

Secondly, I did see your edit just now (and your edited version of the move isn't approved, but the above version is).

If you want to attack people with this, you'll have to explain how. Are you pushing them about? Hitting them with crowbars? Choking them? Trying to pick them up and toss them about? It'll cost you 300 OM per function (i.e. 300 OM to choke people, 300 OM to shove them, etc.). Also, attacking people contradicts the "These images are purely illusory" part of the move earlier, so you really do need to elaborate on how.


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