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Move Approval V
Reworking my Super Utility - Time Dust

Old Rendition
[spoiler]Time Dust(Requires Ranged proficiency, Area Attack, Time Manipulation) Tier Two Super Move - 800OM

Amber forms an odd crystal in her hand colour of silver taking two seconds prepare. When smashed into dust the sandy substance explodes into a field of sonic energy that slows down time for everything within the energy, except Amber. The field expands quickly, but doesn't last very long, about 5 seconds. The change in pace is equal to slowing a character down by half their speed, rounded up. This field of effect is a sphere with a 3-meter radius so it’s fairly small, but can be difficult to escape when being attacked by Amber.[/spoiler]

New Rendition
[spoiler]Time Dust(Requires Ranged proficiency, Time Manipulation) Tier Two Super Move - 800OM

Amber forms an odd crystal in her hand colour of silver taking two seconds prepare. When smashed into dust the sandy substance explodes into a field of sonic energy that slows down time for everything within the energy, except Amber. The field expands quickly and lasts over the course of a minute or so. When released, the energy forms and centers on Amber and can be seen as a grayscaled sphere. This field of effect is a sphere with a 10-meter radius so it’s fairly small, but is still escapable. While affected by the time crawl, people will not neccessarily feel 'slower', but see Amber as if she was moving faster.[/spoiler]
"I've been neglected, harassed, beaten, and diminished all my life. What motivates me to continue? The glory of proving people wrong. Being worth more than the numbing existence offered me. To be a hero." - Amber


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Move Approval V - by Jade Harley - 09-08-2017, 08:03 PM

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