05-24-2018, 07:27 PM
Welcome to the Omniverse. Everything looks mostly good, just a couple things.
From a basic overlook, all of your moves look like they could just be done with the basic Physical Strength proficiency and wouldn't need to be moves. But if you want them to be stronger than normal or have special effects, we can work that out. I'll go over what'd be needed for that below.
Boulder Chop:
-- The only thing I can think of for this one is some kind of windup for it, a little charge time. Given what's already present, a second or so would work fine.
Shooting Star Kick:
-- This is the one that most wouldn't need to be a move; it's just something you could do with a regular kick while you were airborne. That said, I can't really think of much else to add to or say about it, though you might add some extra fatigue or a windup/charge period to it, too, to add some extra force and help the knockdown attempt.
Catapult Knee:
-- Same as for Boulder Chop, a brief windup or charge period would cover this, even if it's a fairly brief one of just about a second.
General notes: Mention in the moves themselves how much fatigue each one causes, since I imagine they'd all do different there. And make sure going forward to include the OM cost (or what you think it should be, based on rules) and what proficiencies/powers it would require. In this case, they'd all be 300 OM moves, and require Physical Strength; Shooting Star Kick would require Super Jumping, as well.
Lastly, as for the thing about the sun: you're free to play it that way if you like, but in an actual competitive event or officially graded fight or the like, fatigue would still wear him down eventually, sunlight or no. Omniphysics can be a cruel mistress that way.
From a basic overlook, all of your moves look like they could just be done with the basic Physical Strength proficiency and wouldn't need to be moves. But if you want them to be stronger than normal or have special effects, we can work that out. I'll go over what'd be needed for that below.
Boulder Chop:
-- The only thing I can think of for this one is some kind of windup for it, a little charge time. Given what's already present, a second or so would work fine.
Shooting Star Kick:
-- This is the one that most wouldn't need to be a move; it's just something you could do with a regular kick while you were airborne. That said, I can't really think of much else to add to or say about it, though you might add some extra fatigue or a windup/charge period to it, too, to add some extra force and help the knockdown attempt.
Catapult Knee:
-- Same as for Boulder Chop, a brief windup or charge period would cover this, even if it's a fairly brief one of just about a second.
General notes: Mention in the moves themselves how much fatigue each one causes, since I imagine they'd all do different there. And make sure going forward to include the OM cost (or what you think it should be, based on rules) and what proficiencies/powers it would require. In this case, they'd all be 300 OM moves, and require Physical Strength; Shooting Star Kick would require Super Jumping, as well.
Lastly, as for the thing about the sun: you're free to play it that way if you like, but in an actual competitive event or officially graded fight or the like, fatigue would still wear him down eventually, sunlight or no. Omniphysics can be a cruel mistress that way.
If you see me around and you got questions, just give a shout. I'm happy to assist.
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