Character Change: Vincent Valentine to Kenpachi Zaraki

[Dane Regan]

Zanpakutō (Physical Strength; 300)
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Standard issue for all shinigami, Zanpakutō (or Soul Cutter) are spiritual blades that serve as physical representations of the user’s power and soul. Zanpakutō typically take the form of a japanese sword, Zaraki’s own taking the form of a nodachi. The sword measures approximately 170 centimeters long from pommel to point, with the hilt measuring around 30 cm. The blade has a very rough and jagged appearance, bearing many chips and mars along its length due to its wielder's careless fighting style. Despite looks, the blade cuts as well as any sharpened blade, due to Zaraki’s immense spiritual pressure. As the blade is literally an extension of his soul, he wields it effortlessly, being capable of dealing blindingly fast slashes with apparent ease. The sword’s hilt is white and wrapped in bandages, matching its sheath. When not in combat, Zaraki keeps the blade at his side, tucked into his obi.[/spoiler]
Ryōdan (Tier 1 Offensive Super Move, 600; Physical Strength)
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Though Zaraki typically chooses to follow no particular fighting style, he has been trained to some degree in the art of kendō. He loathes the practice, as the few times he has used a formal kendō technique his opponent was immediately slain. He thus only uses such stances if he feels his opponent is worth the effort (i.e. if he believes it won’t outright kill them). Gripping the sword with both hands, he adopts a chūdan pose and slashes downward, producing a powerful wave of golden energy. As Zaraki is not proficient with energy manipulation, this technique is a rather short-range attack produced entirely by the strength of the swing rather than consciously expelling spirit energy as other shinigami might. The effect is a cone of destructive power that travels around 3.5 meters from where the tip of his sword makes contact, being approximately .75 meters at its widest point, before fizzling out.[/spoiler]
Overpowering Reiatsu (Tier 1 Defensive Super Move, 600)
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Even among other Captain-level shinigami, Kenpachi has been noted to have a monstrous amount of spiritual power. The effect of this in battle is a positively suffocating spiritual pressure if he consciously pulls back on his self-imposed limits. Those who have experienced his raw spiritual pressure have described an enormous weight bearing down on them, as well as a feeling of dread. When used in the Omniverse, this translates to basic attacks and super moves of the same tier either ‘failing’ before they are properly executed or missing entirely (the effect is the same, description is fodder).[/spoiler]

Looks good to me. You just need to make sure to add a rough character height somewhere on your roster. I've got your OM and log sorted. Another staffer will be along later to change your name.

Your new roster is below. I'm sure you know the rest.

Name: Kenpachi Zaraki
Spent OM: 18800
Consumed OM (0): (for consumed items or OM permanently lost from respecs, etc)
Proficiencies (1000): Physical Strength (1000)
Powers (2300/8000): Super Jumping: Basic (300), Survival (2000)
Moves (300): Zanpakutō (300)
Super Moves (1200): Ryōdan (600), Overpowering Reiatsu (600)
Transformations (0): 
Assists (0):
Items (0):
Artefacts: None
Bases (0): 
Unlocks (14000): Stat Increase I to IV (14000)
Base stats: 
ATK: 5
DEF: 4
SPD: 3
TEC: 2