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Change Character: Xavier Vonzell to Ricter Casenger
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Everything seems good here, I think, except for your move.

The melee attacking part is fine. But the healing part needs some changes.

Firstly: To heal anyone else, you'll need the healing power (not just advanced regen).

Secondly: It will normally take a minute or so of concentration to fully heal cuts, and quite a bit less to close them. So the healing rate here where it can heal moderate wounds is way too strong in comparison. You could charge it up for like 5 seconds or so per swing and then heal just over 5 seconds worth of healing at once or something. More of you made it tiring to use - but your current fatigue level isn't really enough to actually heal wounds without a charge per swing as well. Or maybe just have it close small wounds or something rather than actually healing them.

Basically, compare the amount of healing you can do with the power description. And if you add more drawbacks, you can heal a bit more. But I'd advise just having the sword close wounds rather than healing - since otherwise you'd need a lot of drawbacks to get the strength you want it to be.


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