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Move Approval V
(05-18-2018, 11:22 AM)Captain Marvelous Wrote: Moves for Captain Marvelous, already written on my application but it was suggested to me I post them here.

-Gokai Saber (requires Physical Strength - 600 OM)
[spoiler]
A technomagic sword designed by AkaRed to interface with the Ranger Keys and harness the power of the Super Sentai. It resembles a pirate cutlass but uses sentai energy to make the heavy weapon light and perfectly sharp. It makes exaggerated metallic slicing noises whenever handled. It has a grappling line installed in it that can be used to swing the sword around at a longer range, a different fighting style that was more favoured by his lost partner Luka Milfy. There is a slot built into it to slide in Ranger Keys to power Super Moves. The sentai energy in the blade tends to spark when it strikes an opponent.[/spoiler]
-Gokai Gun (requires Ranged Proficiency - 300 OM)
[spoiler]A technomagic gun designed to look like a flintlock pistol. It was designed by AkaRed to draw on the power of Super Sentai. It hardens energy into round solid bullets that fire in small bursts so it never runs out of ammunition or requires reloading as long as Captain Marvelous is still GokaiRed. It has a cylinder slot built into it that fits Ranger Keys to power up Super Moves.[/spoiler]
-Gokai Change: GORENGER! (Requires Ranged Proficiency - 600 OM)
[spoiler]By inserting the AkaRanger Key into his Mobilates and turning the key Marvelous calls on the power and shape of AkaRanger, which manifests in mostly cosmetic and defensive ways. Taking on the physical appearance and fighting mannerisms of AkaRanger, Marvelous is shielded by the spirit of the first red Sentai leader against one major blow. When overwhelmed with an attack GokaiRed cannot defend against the form shatters, blunting the worst of the assault but returning Marvelous to his GokaiRed form. It also transforms his two Gokai Weapons into the laser pistol (no change but cosmetic for the Gokai Pistol) and the electric whip of AkaRanger (about 10 foot long, can shock those wrapped in it) at the cost of being unable to use his regular Gokai Moves (including non Gorenger Super Moves) for the duration. The Gorenger (somehow) store their weapons in their visors. This is the first Gokai Change Marvelous has and he needs to be in this form in order to use any further moves he purchases from the Gorenger catalogue of abilities.[/spoiler]
-Final Wave: Blast and Slash! - (requires Strength and Ranged, Tier 1 Super Move)
[spoiler]GokaiRed slots two red Ranger Keys into his Saber and Gun and closes the cylinders. The weapons begin to pulse with all the colours of the rainbow and their electronic voice shouts: "FINAL WAVE!" This is a slow build up.

GokaiRed yells; "Blast and Slash!" and initiates the attack. First he aims and fires with the Gokai Gun. This charged bullet crackles with sentai energy flame but moves slowly. Then Marvelous does a large overhand slash with the Gokai Saber and unleashes a cutting wave. This energy wave moves much faster than the bullet, smashing into it and propelling it rapidly into the target. Once struck the target crackles with red lightning before the Sentai energy ignites into a flaming explosion, giving Marvelous enough time to pose dramatically.

Marvelous will only do this when his weapons have built up some energy from fighting, only when he's transformed into GokaiRed and only when it's dramatically appropriate. He can only use it once per fight.[/spoiler]

(Was literally about to post by your join app, lol)

Gokai Saber:
>How big is the sword?
>Can you elaborate on how the grappling line works? I assume it makes the handle detach from the sword and lets you wave it about blade at distance, but how fast can he extend the line? How quickly can he retract it?
>How much extra reach does the grappling line give him? Further than 12ft would make it also require ranged prof.

Gokai Gun:
>What's the fire rate?

Gokai Change: GORENGER!:
>It might seem like a "whole 1000 OM away", but I'd just wait and get a powerup, dude.
>Can you describe the new appearance in more detail, if you are keeping this.
>From what I gather, this does two things, grant him a new weapon and protect him from an attack.
"Marvelous is shielded by the spirit of the first red Sentai leader against one major blow"
>This needs a drawback, otherwise, you're just blocking an attack that comes your way for free.
"can shock those wrapped in it"
>You'll need to explain more. Does it just do "electric" damage to people it hits? Or does it paralyse them a bit? Etc. Also, if you want to be able to use your whip to trap someone, that'd cost another 300 OM (300 for hitting, 300 for trapping).
>I'd advise you come back to this move sometime in the future.

Final Wave: Blast and Slash!: 
>How big is the energy wave, roughly?


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