Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic

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http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9357
Light Ice or Dark Ice, You want a Snowcone
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters: Jak Mar
Total character count including spaces: 32747
Total word count: 6050

Hey Jak, I'm gonna give you the bonus here since the writing itself was good and without major errors (and the story was coherent). I liked the internal dialogue you wrote into the narrative itself (Jak's struggles). But I do think there are some formatting issues in the beginning of the thread (which I know was like, six months ago) and I'm not a fan of the 100-300 word posts that don't seem to add much to the thread. Short posts are okay but it felt like you were writing something without really planning it out, or you weren't in the mood.

With all that said, the word count and character count I got were different from your's, by a lot. I used Microsoft word to calculate it.

Word: 5269
Character: 28,665

Jak Mar - 286.65 OM (Great!)

I shall update your stuff!