Move Creation Workshop

[Reece]

1) He's not going to be able to punch 20 times than his usual attack strength. This move has a 1 second charge time (maybe about 2 or 3 times longer than the wind up for a normal punch). A high fatigue cost. And a 1 minute cooldown - which he doesn't have to abide by. That's like... no. Yes, the fatigue cost is high, but it can't justify something like that. That's just silly.
2) Don't bother putting quantifiers like that in moves. The strength is implied by the drawbacks. It makes something needlessly number-grindy.
3) This should really have Area Attack. (And, since there force is spread outwards, that will also dilute the damage by a bit.)

Also, this move wasn't Raf's. It was the All Might's. He's trying to adapt it for his character, I assume.

Well, no offence to All Might, but the original Move was really badly written. I added the bit about the 1 minute cooldown being optional, because it made no sense before, since that cooldown was mandatory, but he also had the additional hour's fatigue... which only applied if he used it five times in quick succession... which he was literally incapable of doing, because of the cooldown.

Also, a couple things worth noting here:

1) The 1 minute thing doesn't just affect this Move alone; it says he should rest his arm, meaning that he shouldn't be using any Moves that involve that arm... though this is just a soft limit with the way I've reworked it, of course.

2) The Stat scale isn't even close to linear (except for SPD). It's actually pretty crazy how the scaling works for ATK & DEF in particular. Since 4 ATK is enough to break concrete with a normal Move, and punches count as being as strong as normal Moves if you have Physical Strength... really, it's only about as powerful as a punch thrown by someone with 4 or maybe 5 ATK...
It's just that someone with that ATK is about 20 times stronger than someone with 2 ATK...

... at least, based on my extremely shoddy research.




That said, like I mentioned before, I'm not really expecting him to get a number that high. I just don't know what number to actually put there.
Feel free to make a suggestion, Mr Move Guru.
=P