05-14-2018, 11:30 AM
(05-13-2018, 01:22 PM)Rafael Esquivel Wrote: Can someone help me rewrite this to not need Superspeed please?
I'm not going to rewrite a whole move for you since I'm busy and I have exams. If you take a crack at it yourself, someone might be able to take a look at it.
But, I do have a similar strong punching move that just needs physical strength:
Break a Leg (300): Physical
[spoiler]By channelling his mana through one of his limbs, Dane can unleash an incredibly powerful strike. Charging this takes around three seconds, which he can do while moving, but attacking or getting hit breaks his concentration, and must be used the moment it’s ready. Once charged, Dane can execute a punch, kick, or any melee weapon attack. If the attack connects, the stored mana hits with enough force to send opponents flying back a few meters. The extreme strength comes at a cost, however. A successful punch fractures the bones in Dane's hand, and possibly his arm as well if he’s unlucky, while a successful kick fractures or possibly even outright breaks his leg. When using a weapon, while it typically won't get damaged by doing this (unless it's more fragile, like an incidental one), the limb(s) Dane used to hold it will suffer. In essence: same effect, just a different execution. Though he can continue to strike even after he’s broken many bones, overdoing it with the same limb causes larger breaks, and eventually an unplanned amputation. This doesn't use much mana, so Dane is simply left wounded and winded after use.[/spoiler]
Just run up to someone when you use it and it'll basically be the same thing. Well, not quite, since this is actually more damaging than Chaos Breaker, but doesn't come with the explosion. It's more of a focused mega-punch. Or mega-kick, if you want to kick someone. Or mega-sword swing if you use a sword... You get what I mean...