05-13-2018, 01:22 PM
Can someone help me rewrite this to not need Superspeed please?
Chaos Breaker (300, Superspeed, Physical Strength)
Unicron punches forward with enough speed and force that the impact creates an explosive shockwave. When punching an object, such as the ground, or a wall, cracks will first radiate from his punch, and then explode outwards, destroying about everything within five feet of the impact point, most intensely directly in front of his fist, and the force dissipating as it gets further away. When simply punching liquid, there will be a huge dip in the water at the point of impact, and two seconds later the water will rush back with explosive force to refill the hole. When punching air, the shockwave takes the form of a massive rush of air-pressure, blowing away anything that weighs less than two hundred pounds for five feet around his fist.
The air-pressure wave takes on the general form of an egg-shape, extending five feet from his fist, with the narrowest point coming from his fist and getting wider as the shockwave continues.
The actual destructive effect is less than that of a bomb, but significantly more than a regular punch.
Pulling his fist back takes about a second, but the punch itself is augmented with super speed, his fist shooting forwards in an instant. However, it takes about three seconds for the shockwave to reach its full size and another two seconds for the destructive power to dissipate. Doing the punch leaves a strain on his arm, and so he will need about a minute of rest for each arm before he attempts it again.
Using both arms at once has about the same effect as using just one arm, except there will be two points of highest destructive power rather than just one.
The punch is somewhat exhausting to use multiple times in a row, and he will need an hour recovery time after using CHAOS BREAKER five times in close succession.
In order to use the move to its full effect, he must concentrate briefly, and be standing still. If he's attempting a CHAOS BREAER, but he is distracted or moved suddenly, he will simply do a regular punch, having lost concentration.
He is able to do two Chaos Breakers at once, but he is unable to use any other type of move, due to the focus on the precise way he's using his powers. Chaos Breaker was inspired by the show “My Hero Academica” and one of the techniques of All Might from the memories of Rafael. Unicron created this move to give him a powerful unarmed attack he could use to take down most of his opponents.
It should be noted that when he is using this move, there is purple electricity crackling across his body - a dead give away of what he is about to do to his opponent. This is severely taxing on both Rafael, and Unicron to use. So, he can only use this move about every 35 seconds, at maximum.
Chaos Breaker (300, Superspeed, Physical Strength)
Unicron punches forward with enough speed and force that the impact creates an explosive shockwave. When punching an object, such as the ground, or a wall, cracks will first radiate from his punch, and then explode outwards, destroying about everything within five feet of the impact point, most intensely directly in front of his fist, and the force dissipating as it gets further away. When simply punching liquid, there will be a huge dip in the water at the point of impact, and two seconds later the water will rush back with explosive force to refill the hole. When punching air, the shockwave takes the form of a massive rush of air-pressure, blowing away anything that weighs less than two hundred pounds for five feet around his fist.
The air-pressure wave takes on the general form of an egg-shape, extending five feet from his fist, with the narrowest point coming from his fist and getting wider as the shockwave continues.
The actual destructive effect is less than that of a bomb, but significantly more than a regular punch.
Pulling his fist back takes about a second, but the punch itself is augmented with super speed, his fist shooting forwards in an instant. However, it takes about three seconds for the shockwave to reach its full size and another two seconds for the destructive power to dissipate. Doing the punch leaves a strain on his arm, and so he will need about a minute of rest for each arm before he attempts it again.
Using both arms at once has about the same effect as using just one arm, except there will be two points of highest destructive power rather than just one.
The punch is somewhat exhausting to use multiple times in a row, and he will need an hour recovery time after using CHAOS BREAKER five times in close succession.
In order to use the move to its full effect, he must concentrate briefly, and be standing still. If he's attempting a CHAOS BREAER, but he is distracted or moved suddenly, he will simply do a regular punch, having lost concentration.
He is able to do two Chaos Breakers at once, but he is unable to use any other type of move, due to the focus on the precise way he's using his powers. Chaos Breaker was inspired by the show “My Hero Academica” and one of the techniques of All Might from the memories of Rafael. Unicron created this move to give him a powerful unarmed attack he could use to take down most of his opponents.
It should be noted that when he is using this move, there is purple electricity crackling across his body - a dead give away of what he is about to do to his opponent. This is severely taxing on both Rafael, and Unicron to use. So, he can only use this move about every 35 seconds, at maximum.